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Dissed by Shady Bruvaz 1st verse

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Dissed by Shady Bruvaz 1st verse

Postby ShaBruv » Sep 24th, '09, 19:34

to the go to sleep instrumental by Em Obie and DMX

Hope ya like it
comment on ways i can improve

I got a new record
i won that race
y'all sold a 11 albums but i'm in 1st place
I only got four
an i'm fucking poor
Well at least my wifes not a fat stinkin whore
I know this sounds like some d12 shit
send in the hounds
for you to come git
If you ever diss me i'ma diss you back
you fucking twat
you think you can rap go on show me that
Now im preppin myself for the chase
Big ass revolover to shoot you in your face
i'll be nice , go at your pace
which is slow,
just like ya flow dawg
yeah get this space!
Bitch you retarded
i've only just started
i had sex with ya wife but then she farted
this is only half hearted
i'm gonna have you carted
out of this nation to a wildlife preservation
where people will stare at ya and laugh at your mug
yet u still think u a mofocking thug
ya gotta a lot to learn
now its ur turn
(gunfire)
Last edited by ShaBruv on Sep 26th, '09, 16:57, edited 1 time in total.
I know you want to retaliate but you won't dare,
Cause you fuckin with some ****** like this who just don't care.

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Re: MY unfinished diss record to noone but you shud read

Postby bullet_boy46 » Sep 24th, '09, 19:35

dope :worship: plus im new here
Solace wrote:Oh stop your making me blush :blinking:

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Re: MY unfinished diss record to noone but you shud read

Postby daddycoco23 » Sep 24th, '09, 19:51

:y:
All you people say im wack?
Y'all can suck on my ball sack- Daddycoco (Me)


battle rap record 1-1
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