Emotionally Drained.

[MC Anonymous]

Pathways of heaven, the rap ways to hell
going for sevens, the gat says oh well
They don't even care, they'd rather be deaf
So you see me bleeding there, with some bullets on my chest
I'm depressed and a wreck, nobody notices that
they rather go and spit wack, rumors about me, my cap
will detatch, from retraction of a gat, that's that
reactions is wack, people rather see me fade to black
I've cried countless times, tears drops on the lines
of my paper, and it stains, the reflection of the times
Suicide, homicide, neglegence of the mind
I said all this cause I'm blind, God give a sign
my bod-y is in slime, please help my life
stealth my knife, give me a healthy wife
I don't wanna be alone anymore, in a zone
where my bones can be torn, by evil spawn that's born

Have you ever felt hated, friendships disintergrated
cinders came with morbid animosity, got to be desegnated
to the driver of this life, in my socks and my shoes
If I drop, yall will rule, that's not gonna happen fool
but you make it so hard, so so hard
for me to get my pen and pad, and flow those bars
I go so far, to end up, broken with ten cuts
fed up, and fed X, faster then boxing, what?
I got the cuts, my spirit bleeds, my body is drained
are you all really happy that you got me insane?
Stupid little fools, don't you see what you've done
You've created a monster, can't be stopped with a gun
Cause' as long as I write, I will be eternity
all you other haters of my life will eventually turn to me
now it's your turn to be, where your morals or ethics
if you can't find it, don't sweat it, when you get split

[classthe_king]

You always come hard. (Pause) Again your flow is awesome, are you recording it?

[Xray]

Damn man I can tell the lyrical style changed. Before you had lines that ended up too short where it felt like it was a snippet of a line then another snippet would come (next line). But this was different, each line explained itself well, and it delivered a dope message man. I felt what you were saying, and the flow was seriously really good. Improvement's looking great homie, keep it up.

[gutawafang]

Dope. Especially this part:
I've cried countless times, tears drops on the lines
of my paper, and it stains, the reflection of the times.

Seriously, it almost made me tear. It's too emotional.

[daddycoco23]

dope

[Arabian Shady]

Damn man I can tell the lyrical style changed. Before you had lines that ended up too short where it felt like it was a snippet of a line then another snippet would come (next line). But this was different, each line explained itself well, and it delivered a dope message man. I felt what you were saying, and the flow was seriously really good. Improvement's looking great homie, keep it up.

yea i agrreee with that homie, no doubt the concepts are dop encouraging the reader to read on, that was exellent

[daddycoco23]

classic

[bullet_boy46]