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Generalized Back Up; Fuck A ''Daddy''coco.

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Generalized Back Up; Fuck A ''Daddy''coco.

Postby MC Anonymous » Sep 24th, '09, 03:31

Puff daddy with a coco craze,
he a bitch with a bozo's name
Put a hole in his heart quicker then his kids..
now watch this loco gaze..

Aiiyo,
I'll DSS your chest, test breasts of ya bitch, yes..
wait, you a mess, crew is left in arrest
eternal slumber, find your kids and get a number
one missed call? I'll kill them and let you wonder
wack raps, rhymes ya tracks lack, a fag that
got the name daddycoco at gay bars suckin' nut sacks
see I like my bars tender like I serve the drinks
you try to connect words but your cursive stinks
The biggest fail you posted is thinkin' that you a father
when both ya bitch and ya kids gone, so why you bother?
Writing is theraputic but you're to scared to do it
so you shit on a paper and dare us to stare at creul shit
I don't needa say you're wack, you do it on your own
I just like to reinforce what you spewin on this zone
Don't you dare look in the mirror, I'll be there lookin' back
my reflection reflects your reflection without it being wack
an oxymoron, you getting degrees at being illiterate
and degree burns on ya stomache, firefighter certificates
''Time To Shine'' like einstien mind, rewind time
behind rhymes, rape ya kids and say it was monster filled with slime
mother don't wanna see you cause there is nothing to see
if your nothing to yourself, you're never something to me
Whether or not I'm in your head, I'll brainstorm your shit
I'm god on another planet, your the mormon kid
your little paragraph proofs aint gonna fly with me
bruises on ya ass... to much jail cell timing, B?
Or is it your ''girlfriend'' was a transvestite with a penis
and the ''kids'' is really a kid that's just a plastic fetus
In short, fuck you, fuck your life, go ahead and grab a knife
stab you twice, heart and throat and end ya shit, the little light...
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Generalized Back Up; Fuck A ''Daddy''coco.

Postby daddycoco23 » Sep 24th, '09, 03:33

dope verses need to be like ya i need to learn :worship: :worship:
All you people say im wack?
Y'all can suck on my ball sack- Daddycoco (Me)


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Re: Generalized Back Up; Fuck A ''Daddy''coco.

Postby classthe_king » Sep 24th, '09, 03:39

Hahahah, this is dope as fuck but...why the diss?
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: Generalized Back Up; Fuck A ''Daddy''coco.

Postby Fa-Q » Sep 24th, '09, 04:38

Lol sad is this shit real about his kids
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Re: Generalized Back Up; Fuck A ''Daddy''coco.

Postby Relapse.LP » Sep 24th, '09, 06:17

Whenever someone disses daddycoco, daddycoco is the first to respond. Additionally, he responds with positive feedback, haha. :y:
Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/


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Re: Generalized Back Up; Fuck A ''Daddy''coco.

Postby Le Tunisien » Sep 24th, '09, 09:31

mother don't wanna see you cause there is nothing to see
if your nothing to yourself, you're never something to me

damn,i love those lines :worship: :worship: :worship: :worship: :worship:
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Re: Generalized Back Up; Fuck A ''Daddy''coco.

Postby daddycoco23 » Sep 24th, '09, 15:03

da.relapse.lp wrote:Whenever someone disses daddycoco, daddycoco is the first to respond. Additionally, he responds with positive feedback, haha. :y:


i have good spirit
All you people say im wack?
Y'all can suck on my ball sack- Daddycoco (Me)


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Re: Generalized Back Up; Fuck A ''Daddy''coco.

Postby Arabian Shady » Sep 24th, '09, 19:26

i had a fire extinguisher reeady , cause when i saw the title i knew this was fire,haha all jokes aside tho ,that was a great diss, punchlines from the begining, flow,structure, smooth transitions, everything was dope as fuck,livin up to you rep. homie :y:
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Re: Generalized Back Up; Fuck A ''Daddy''coco.

Postby Solace » Sep 24th, '09, 21:37

le tunisien wrote:
mother don't wanna see you cause there is nothing to see
if your nothing to yourself, you're never something to me

damn,i love those lines :worship: :worship: :worship: :worship: :worship:

Word that shit was real good, and this entire diss was pretty raw going at his personal life.

Liked the diss MC :y:
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Re: Generalized Back Up; Fuck A ''Daddy''coco.

Postby gutawafang » Sep 25th, '09, 06:59

Oh nice. :y:
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