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Postby DƎRDYPK » Sep 25th, '09, 05:04

this is something HELLA new & wrote it while i was high so there might be some spelling errors but.........I think imma start dropping a lil bit more on here.....if not start recording again....cuz i haven't recorded in ages....anyways heres the rhyme...its down there :o
























i just wanna know one thing
what will my future bring?
where will i go? who will i meet?
unsolved questions are my one & only treat
i never move fast & I never move slow
I look to the sky as i watch the stars glow
i saw the rain fall looking out my window
i stay locked inside taking hits of indo
i stay making tracks that corrupt ya mind
i could i say alot of shit i'll erupt this time
I COULD GET HARDCORE & JUST PUNK ROCK A RHYME
I COULD MEET YOU ON THE STREETS I COULD SOCK YA BLIND
FUCK YOUR WEAPONS MOTHERFUCKER GET A GLOCK GET A 9
BETTER FILL ME UP WITH LEAD TO MAKE ME STOP THIS TIME
FORREAL COME GET ME I'LL GIVE YOU MY ADRESS
ALL I NEED WAS A MIC TO RELIVE THIS STRESS
BECAUSE I CAME UP SO QUICK I MUST CONFESS
I LIVE BY WHAT I SAID EVERYDAYS ANOTHER TEST
ITS A JUNGLE NOW A DAYS SO YOU GOTTA BE THE BEST
ITS SURVIVAL OF SICKEST AINT NO ROOM FOR THE REST
ITS THE TRUTH MOTHAFUCKA TAKE A KNIVE TO YA CHEST
GO & RUNAWAY UNTILL YA PARENTS NOTICED YA LEFT
i take off my cap i just wanna relax
i feel good wit a stereo bumped to the max
but sometimes i feel down i wanna drink a can of gas
i wanna write my last track & just swallow a match
i wanna die for the stars i wanna fry into ash
i want the sky to be black i want this darkness to last
i wanna talk with the spirits that have lived in the past
theres just so many questions that i want to ask?
i know you got some too we just search for the fact
we could make it to the top but we stuck down flat
dreams crushed like a fly with the swatter say splat
i dont even know what im saying i dont need to rhyme crap
i been rhyming for years i just try to make a living
either i blow up one day or im headed straight to prison
alot of old faces that i truly am missing
they got me motivated now so sit back & listen
we can take the world over cuz we derdy to the fulliest
we never stop what we do unless you fill us with bullets
you know what im saying just flow for a minute
we got one life to live so we might as well bring it
as far as it can go so we better keep moving
we dream big & go far we aint losing
all these people awake yo they aint snoozing
they turn on the stereo with shit your approving
you say its dope so its dope i wont take it as a joke
im just another crazy folk & you see i wanna float
higher than the space that we know & see
all i ever wanted was to grow to be
a rap making superstar a straight mc
but i wanna be you i dont wanna be me
theres so many things that we just dont see
im just typing my mind & it sets me free
high above the clouds i puff on t.h.c
come & travel in my shoes whats it like to be me?
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Re: unsolved questions

Postby gutawafang » Sep 25th, '09, 06:17

I know the way it flows cuz I listened to many of your other songs. It's dope especially the capitals. LOL.

i want the sky to be black i want this darkness to last
I just think that is dope.

Nice. :y:
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Re: unsolved questions

Postby DƎRDYPK » Sep 25th, '09, 06:32

gutawafang wrote:I know the way it flows cuz I listened to many of your other songs. It's dope especially the capitals. LOL.

i want the sky to be black i want this darkness to last
I just think that is dope.

Nice. :y:


thanks Fish :flower:
by the way nice new avatar bro :y:
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Re: unsolved questions

Postby gutawafang » Sep 25th, '09, 06:36

DerdyPK wrote:
gutawafang wrote:I know the way it flows cuz I listened to many of your other songs. It's dope especially the capitals. LOL.

i want the sky to be black i want this darkness to last
I just think that is dope.

Nice. :y:


thanks Fish :flower:
by the way nice new avatar bro :y:

haha. no problem.

and that's hannah fanning. :toocool: thanks :happy:
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Re: unsolved questions

Postby DƎRDYPK » Sep 25th, '09, 17:13

gutawafang wrote:
DerdyPK wrote:
gutawafang wrote:I know the way it flows cuz I listened to many of your other songs. It's dope especially the capitals. LOL.

i want the sky to be black i want this darkness to last
I just think that is dope.

Nice. :y:


thanks Fish :flower:
by the way nice new avatar bro :y:

haha. no problem.

and that's hannah fanning. :toocool: thanks :happy:


well damn bro Hannah Fanning got those beautiful eyes I just wanna stare into forever :worship:
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