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Pump Up (Short Rap)

Postby bullet_boy46 » Sep 25th, '09, 20:33

Stand on ya feet, you be running the streets
you be spittin heat, flow with the beat
pound words more then you pound meat
dig in the dirt with your cleats
treat all these people to trick or treats
let them fly out of there seats and praise you
because from there point of view, they think you God
you fire rhymes like a firing squad
You be climbing to the top of the charts
your heart be pounding, its like you be rounding second base
at a steady pace but then everything get erased
right infront of your freaking face
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Re: Pump Up (Unfinished)

Postby eminemgirl1234 » Sep 25th, '09, 20:40

you suck! :n:
"Sometimes I feel so alone,
I just don't know, feels like I been down this road before.
So lonely and cold, it's like something takes over me,
soon as I go home and close the door.
Kinda feels like Déjà Vu, I wanna get away from this place I do,
but I can't and I wont say I tried but I know that's a lie cuz I don't,
and why I just don't know...

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Re: Pump Up (Unfinished)

Postby bullet_boy46 » Sep 25th, '09, 20:42

eminemgirl1234 wrote:you suck! :n:


yea caused you PM me and asked me to go out..and i said no...thanks...also you said i sucked not the rap :shifty:
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Re: Pump Up (Unfinished)

Postby Emadyville » Sep 25th, '09, 20:49

bullet_boy46 wrote:yea caused you PM me and asked me to go out..and i said no...thanks...also you said i sucked not the rap :shifty:


I smell bullshit :unsure: and this wasn't very good and mad short even though it's unfinished :n:
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Re: Pump Up (Unfinished)

Postby bullet_boy46 » Sep 25th, '09, 20:50

Emadyville wrote:
bullet_boy46 wrote:yea caused you PM me and asked me to go out..and i said no...thanks...also you said i sucked not the rap :shifty:


I smell bullshit :unsure: and this wasn't very good and mad short even though it's unfinished :n:


what you want me to post the stuff she wrote me here :zipped:

also i know it wasnt good mostley because it WAS short but yea...
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Re: Pump Up (Unfinished)

Postby bullet_boy46 » Sep 25th, '09, 20:53

bullet_boy46 wrote:
Emadyville wrote:
bullet_boy46 wrote:yea caused you PM me and asked me to go out..and i said no...thanks...also you said i sucked not the rap :shifty:


I smell bullshit :unsure: and this wasn't very good and mad short even though it's unfinished :n:


what you want me to post the stuff she wrote me here :zipped:

also i know it wasnt good mostley because it WAS short but yea...


here ya go


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cool...wanna go out?

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no bullshit my friend :whistle:
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Re: Pump Up (Unfinished)

Postby Fa-Q » Sep 25th, '09, 21:03

You need to screenshot it cause you can forge that shit easily...I believe you but some might not
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Re: Pump Up (Unfinished)

Postby bullet_boy46 » Sep 25th, '09, 21:05

Fa-Q wrote:You need to screenshot it cause you can forge that shit easily...I believe you but some might not


fine ill screenshot :whistle:
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Re: Pump Up (Unfinished)

Postby bullet_boy46 » Sep 25th, '09, 21:09

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Re: Pump Up (Unfinished)

Postby Fa-Q » Sep 25th, '09, 21:27

Woooooooow
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Re: Pump Up (Unfinished)

Postby bullet_boy46 » Sep 25th, '09, 21:37

Fa-Q wrote:Woooooooow


lol i know
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