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Words (Skit)

Postby bullet_boy46 » Sep 25th, '09, 23:05

This is my first skit :happy: lets see how i can do this...

*Crowd Chants*
Announcer:Yo final round here, this fucking 2 mad skillz bitches up in this shit! We Got, Da Rapist, and we got bullet_boy, thiz shit be off the chain, but first we be doing coin toss, rapist what you choose?
Da Rapist: Headz
*Coin Flips*
Announcer:Aight rapist you got it what u choose?
Da Rapist: I go first against this white ass
Announcer:Aight, my mothafucka spin that shit
*rapist spits*
Announcer:DAM nice shiz, man nice shiz
Announcer:Aight, bullet 40 seconds, spin that shit my fucka
Bullet:aight look......yo look........this bi-.......
Crowd:BOOOOOO
*Bullet runs of stage, and leaves* *door slams*

lol pretty much similar to first 8 Mile rap...
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Re: Words (Skit)

Postby Spyder » Sep 25th, '09, 23:58

i dont see this as creative writing :unsure:
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Re: Words (Skit)

Postby bullet_boy46 » Sep 25th, '09, 23:59

Spyder wrote:i dont see this as creative writing :unsure:

i thought it was :unsure:
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Re: Words (Skit)

Postby Solace » Sep 26th, '09, 01:33

1. Copying Eminem isnt the smartest way to start off; believe me
2. No one really cares to read Skits here so just keep posting raps.
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Postby bullet_boy46 » Sep 26th, '09, 01:36

Solace wrote:1. Copying Eminem isnt the smartest way to start off; believe me
2. No one really cares to read Skits here so just keep posting raps.

](*,) im not try to be daddycoco
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Re: Words (Skit)

Postby Solace » Sep 26th, '09, 01:37

bullet_boy46 wrote:
Solace wrote:1. Copying Eminem isnt the smartest way to start off; believe me
2. No one really cares to read Skits here so just keep posting raps.

](*,) im not try to be daddycoco

Just telling you how it is man, keep writing tho.

MSNs still doing stupid shit I just dont understand why it dont work.
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Re: Words (Skit)

Postby bullet_boy46 » Sep 26th, '09, 01:45

Solace wrote:
bullet_boy46 wrote:
Solace wrote:1. Copying Eminem isnt the smartest way to start off; believe me
2. No one really cares to read Skits here so just keep posting raps.

](*,) im not try to be daddycoco

Just telling you how it is man, keep writing tho.

MSNs still doing stupid shit I just dont understand why it dont work.

ok..
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