Engage (Short Rap)

[bullet_boy46]

This i know this isnt that great but positive feed please

i use my 12 gauge with rage
i fully engage in the batting cage
im more colder then the ice age
with my bat ill brake your rib cage.
my rhymes are hypnotic, they make you feel physhotic
i engage in some narcotics, weed, speed, meth
probably leading myself to my death.
ending up taking my one last breath on my death bed.
either that or get filled with lead, or ending up brain dead
all has been said and done, but i still ain number one

A second attempt at rapping

[Fa-Q]

Cool short piece...keep it up

[Le Tunisien]

hmm i enjoyed reading it,
keep practisin bro ,u'r improvin

[bullet_boy46]

hmm i enjoyed reading it,
keep practisin bro ,u'r improvin

thanks

[BILI]

Its pretty cool for a second time,just keep on practicing

[bullet_boy46]

Its pretty cool for a second time,just keep on practicing

lol im telling people all to come ehre cause i want some feedback but thanks

[FAME]

my rhymes are hypnotic, they make you feel physhotic
i engage in some narcotics, weed, speed, meth
probably leading myself to my death.

This is my favorite part of the rap. Your really improving fast. Way to go man, keep climbing that ladder.

[bullet_boy46]

my rhymes are hypnotic, they make you feel physhotic
i engage in some narcotics, weed, speed, meth
probably leading myself to my death.

This is my favorite part of the rap. Your really improving fast. Way to go man, keep climbing that ladder.

[lilrossy]

yea man not bad, keep it up.