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Rusting

Postby J Roc » Sep 26th, '09, 03:38

I'm tight yo.. u should put on a Night Show
i know u put ur "Heart into Rap" Cuz All ur Lines is "Typo's" (Type-O's!)
Up ur grammer I Need a New Kinda Rival
Cause beating me is a "Long Shot" Like a Sniper Rifle
i Might Shoot Back Clips, Leave u "Bagged Up" Like a Drive-Thru Sandwhich
Sound get's-Forty So Fuck "His-story" Like Highschool Classes
i'mma get to the Issue, You wanna battle i'mma do more than just diss you
u'll get a Blast From The Past Cause it'll take half a second to hit you
Plus my Shit Smooth, My Chain So Iced I Could Stack Them together & Build An Igloo

Lines is so rusty..prallly going to get into some shit soon so i felt like posting up a lil sum sum

: staticsmoking : i'm a addict choking ... :staticsmoking:
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Re: Rusting

Postby Relapse.LP » Sep 26th, '09, 03:42

The first 4 lines are much better than the rest, but the whole thing is dope. :y:
Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/


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Re: Rusting

Postby lilrossy » Sep 26th, '09, 03:45

J roc wrote:I'm tight yo.. u should put on a Night Show
i know u put ur "Heart into Rap" Cuz All ur Lines is "Typo's" (Type-O's!)

Nice drop man, always luv ur shit. keep em commin. :y:
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Sluts I introduce to anal call me a pain in the ass"
"Got hoes suspicious. Even one peg leg bitches
After I came, fucked em with they own leg
They ain't know the difference"
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Re: Rusting

Postby Solace » Sep 26th, '09, 05:10

Dope short one to let us know you're still alive haha...nice drop
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Re: Rusting

Postby bullet_boy46 » Sep 26th, '09, 05:11

nice shit
Solace wrote:Oh stop your making me blush :blinking:

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