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Postby Ka0t1c » Sep 16th, '09, 14:54

i see i have been easily forgotten but y'all remember me well
i really didn't leave tho, i've just got locked in my cell
and even still, in a nut shell, while i'm livin thru a hell i'm givin my all
on Kaotic, people knew who to call when the evil put us under a spell
cuz a part of me saw how i could solve our problems; the flaws around the 4 walls
that tower, to fall, they probably won't, so i'll show you my power right now
and no this is not a joke, you want to challenge art thou?


sorry, i've got a time limit, i'm in Afghanistan bitches! :'(
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: not finished but i'll work on this

Postby gutawafang » Sep 16th, '09, 16:25

Haha. Glad you had time to post this! :b:

It sounds godly man. Pretty strong lyrics . I mean, you chose the right words man. Nice. :)
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Re: not finished but i'll work on this

Postby Ka0t1c » Sep 27th, '09, 11:34

thanx for readin and feedin, sorry it took me this long to w/b.
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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