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Fuck Being Polite

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Fuck Being Polite

Postby MC Anonymous » Sep 27th, '09, 22:22

I got more connects then the skeletal system
I don't give a fuck if you fell as a victim
horemones in more tones through microphones
high off estrogen, testosterone
Tattoo my sperm in the back of her tonsils
I'm fuckin' her so long that her crack has the fossils
buckin' the 12 like I'm throwing apostles
scatter in they head, when I'm flowin' this hostile
more nines then a million left sides of a clock
like tetris the way I counterclockwise the blocks
Punchline your face til' your brain explodes
my tracks like the whores, cause the train's exposed
bang cocks when I shot, in the middle of tialand
to an asian hooker in the back of her eyes then
made her see the kingdom come, quicker then moses
fluids in her eyeballs, sicker osmosis

Anonymous fucks being polite, inside a light
where the rhyme is tight, and the lines are bright
and people spit what they want, without regrets
so I let my stress just unleash the best
of me and you'll see, I'm not like you
when this chorus is through, the next verse will spew
the text hurting you, your ears bursting too
gets that's reprecussions when I'm burstin proof

Rhyme innocent and evil like double entendres
moving the piece, pop trouble in honors
9 eleven times, like a tragedy number
you like to come hard, then battle me busta..
I russia/rush ya faster then the meteorites,
spittin, beating you life, rippin the keys of this light
disintergrate faces, spit fast and blaze shit
hovered in darkness like alien space-ships
facelift chin with, spin of fists, this
is in to win shit, don't like, then kiss dicks
I let the cartridge blow like super nintendo
and hoes can go suck the flow outta my hole
I'm genius, lyrical seamstress since fetus
Mom's womb, hierglyphic of a mic, believe this
you fail to be a bitch, you a sexual translate
punches through my rhymes, how my textual hands taste

Anonymous fucks being polite, inside a light
where the rhyme is tight, and the lines are bright
and people spit what they want, without regrets
so I let my stress just unleash the best
of me and you'll see, I'm not like you
when this chorus is through, the next verse will spew
the text hurting you, your ears bursting too
gets that's reprecussions when I'm burstin proof

My DNA in a temple, winding staircases
shine I emit is blinding scared faces
Xray of mine a microphone wrist that
glows when it's shown by hypertone sick raps
uppercut ya jaw make ya spine do backflips
split you with this, take a rhyme and hatchet
then I slice your chest, jumprope intestines
drop and stop dumb jokes who question
hope I section, brain from the pain infections
chains I left them hang the lames with tention
cain is spent then, coke will choke your neck and
split like techs when put to the back like tekken
track this lesson, train through the pain and question
came disecting, face with the mace, I'm guessin
you fell back on this track, with ya mouth wide open
spit technological sound like the south side spoken

Anonymous fucks being polite, inside a light
where the rhyme is tight, and the lines are bright
and people spit what they want, without regrets
so I let my stress just unleash the best
of me and you'll see, I'm not like you
when this chorus is through, the next verse will spew
the text hurting you, your ears bursting too
guess that's reprecussions when I'm burstin proof
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Fuck Being Polite

Postby classthe_king » Sep 27th, '09, 22:32

:o Dang you killed that, crazy punchlines, most of which i probably don't even understand that are hidden in there. :worship:
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: Fuck Being Polite

Postby macdaddy019967 » Sep 27th, '09, 22:32

facelift chin with, spin of fists, this
is in to win shit, don't like, then kiss dicks
I let the cartridge blow like super nintendo
and hoes can go suck the flow outta my hole

thats what im talking about :y:
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Re: Fuck Being Polite

Postby Emadyville » Sep 27th, '09, 22:42

Verses were dope as fuck, i wasn't a fan of the hook, but the rest was fire good shit :y:
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Re: Fuck Being Polite

Postby Fa-Q » Sep 27th, '09, 23:25

thats the old Anon...wow that first verse was crazy....liked them all tho...dope
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Re: Fuck Being Polite

Postby Relapse.LP » Sep 28th, '09, 00:09

Really dope verses. :y:

Uh... I don't like the chorus though. Sounds like a kid's nursery rhyme-ish. :sweating:
Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/


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Re: Fuck Being Polite

Postby Arabian Shady » Sep 28th, '09, 16:28

Aiyo, you killed it son!, punchlines was spot on, flow was tight too, wordplay was at your best-no doubt aboutt that homie
Sick shit
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We're all on the same page, Yet we're standing apart on different lines'
So when we face rage, Ya'll fake it and let THEM commit horrific crimes
50 years & going straight, Yet this performance aint worth your time,OUR
Shit is BACKSTAGE,Cause the front page aint worth Kashmir and Palestine.
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Re: Fuck Being Polite

Postby DƎRDYPK » Sep 28th, '09, 19:50

Like I said homie you keep getting better & better each drop :worship:
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