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Quick Keystyle

Postby Solace » Sep 27th, '09, 17:39

On MSN with MC Anonymous I keyed this:

I'm the best you'll see, no one standing next to me but I won't come at you disrespectfully,
Continue testing me and vexing me and then you'll see you need to get some weaponry,
Stop messing b, you're testing G's who will attack you until they see your testies bleed,
You'll be getting beef, setting streets to come wrestling freaks, like I said I'm the best you'll see.

Obviously I'm not good at punches or anything so I stay onto the multies.
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Re: Quick Keystyle

Postby bullet_boy46 » Sep 27th, '09, 17:41

liked it make your testies bleed....lol..
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Re: Quick Keystyle

Postby Solace » Sep 27th, '09, 17:42

Lmao thanks.
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Re: Quick Keystyle

Postby DƎRDYPK » Sep 27th, '09, 17:44

hell yeah son :smoking:
stay fucking with multies :y:
i enjoyed that lil bit right there
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Re: Quick Keystyle

Postby Solace » Sep 27th, '09, 17:44

Thanks bro :happy:
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Re: Quick Keystyle

Postby J Roc » Sep 27th, '09, 18:24

Not too Shabby Bro
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Re: Quick Keystyle

Postby Fa-Q » Sep 27th, '09, 18:30

Lol good short verse...yea in my opinion multis > Punchlines...good work
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Re: Quick Keystyle

Postby Solace » Sep 28th, '09, 03:15

Thanks bros! :y:
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Re: Quick Keystyle

Postby FAME » Sep 28th, '09, 04:23

I can see its very different from your normal style. I would love to see more of this style too, maybe its just me. Good punchlines, I almost went "burrn" outloud. :)
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Re: Quick Keystyle

Postby Yah-hah » Sep 28th, '09, 18:58

Yeah punchlines are ok but Multi's is definitly where it's at bro. Always go and read stuff by people who kill it with the multi's thats the best stuff. Nice little drop man
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Re: Quick Keystyle

Postby Arabian Shady » Sep 28th, '09, 19:12

that was well written, surprisingly wiked structure! for an msn piece i mean :sweating:
wiked
Check out my verse as well,its called THE RETURN :b:
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Re: Quick Keystyle

Postby Solace » Sep 28th, '09, 21:56

Thanks guys, and Arabian I definitely will tonight :y:

PS. Arabian Shady, you should drop more pieces here :smoking:
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Re: Quick Keystyle

Postby Arabian Shady » Sep 29th, '09, 11:32

Solace wrote:Thanks guys, and Arabian I definitely will tonight :y:

PS. Arabian Shady, you should drop more pieces here :smoking:



haha i'm workin on it homie :b: ,Much love for your feedback :8)
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