Opt or Not to Opt

[mcZu]

Two old verses, feedback is appreciated as always.


Procedures proceed to ensure that that dude
Knows how to acknowledge knowledge, due
Being knowledgeable in latitude terms too
On the longitude I use my attitude in terms to
Add it up ‘till it becomes rude
So Zu being arrogant is just a mirror shard sharpened due
The coordinates cooperating when I mirror lost too
Navigation checked; figures march through
Navigate through like chess do, sneakers feel like frost too
Agitate, convulse, shake, con pulse and then sue
The issues issuing certain restraint issues
Shit’s cruel, and due humanity being that rude
So being a human being just adds to being that dude
Far from being cool, shipped away too
I’m on deck though I can’t ship through
Can’t dock my ship –lost my grip too
I’m infamous, ‘cause I cause people to shock too
This logic is paralyzed though dressed in a parabolic suit

Optics suggest to condensate mo’ often
I tell ‘em my emotions are cons, gotta sedate them mo’ often
People segregate too often
They rather set a degrade rate than greet each other
It’s greed that’s bothering sisters and brothers
We’re all humans, yet I insist to differ from the others
Life’s rigor mortis –pen game make’s it softer
So from now on I’m gonna grab the pen mo’ often
Insert the pin and then throw away the grenade to bother
The people who misuse the ink to alter
The way people think –all they do is arouse a laughter
I sink away when I flow like an epigram author
While I’m at it I try to alter my alter ego before his ego decides to slaughter
He resides in my cerebral cortex though doctored
An animal, a beast that I fathered
She's revolving 'round free yet she seems to be a martyr
Every single common issue has caused her
To single out the illusions on a field with proper copper

[classthe_king]

Wow, liked it alot. Love how you played the different ways to say the words. Your pieces always make me think, love it

[Arabian Shady]

the begining was unbelievable! like seriously it blew me away, innumerable multies , like at one point i actually had to re-read the bar just to understand what you were sayin! lol
That was supa dope

[mcZu]

Thanks Classy and Arabian Shady, appreciate it.

[Yah-hah]

Straight dopeness bro. Your words are so far above anyone elses it's like psychology class all over again :P mad respect homie

[mcZu]

Straight dopeness bro. Your words are so far above anyone elses it's like psychology class all over again :P mad respect homie

Hahaha, thanks bro. Appreciate it man.

kinda like Wordsmith By Chino, no bite police this time lol i liked it and thought it was good and writeen well good job Z

Damn, haven't heard that song in ages, gotta d/l it, lol. And thanks Cole, appreciate it.