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Hate Me, Hate Hip Hop (Keystyle)

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Hate Me, Hate Hip Hop (Keystyle)

Postby AOBrien09 » Oct 4th, '09, 21:47

Am lovin this game, no shruggin a change, to that feelin,
but hater's hatin on the name, it's lame, but the fact they breedin,
expandin the hatin command and am brandin them,
with hatin the game, gotta be, it's the only understandin,
explanation,it's like lil wayne with the text's they keep makin,
wackness, god this bunch are fake an am gonna treat me cravin,
for exposin like celeb bimbo's when crossed by papparazzi,
exposin the pussy in them, an they lost like that nazi,
hitler who hated on jew's, well hip-hop got it's own holocoust,
debated through an through, but they ain't no cost,
on the price of rap, hip hop what ever you wanna call it,
except my life, so much, that the shot from'a bullet,
a would take it, will rap make it, like jay z said on BP 3,
you want old shit buy his old album, well see me flee,
to a another artist if I did that, like biggie, or pac
matter of fact it was retarted sayin that, fuck your track,
on to the next one yeah cause biggie an pac aren't hear,
so your the next one jay z you don't paint the same art yeah,
Fuck it am done spittin some, written's which are probably done,
by artist's in freestyle's like lil wayne think he ain't god we that dumb,

Maybe some mistakes dunno cause a rushed this :( feed anyone :flower:
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Re: Hate Me, Hate Hip Hop (Keystyle)

Postby Just Silver » Oct 5th, '09, 23:33

id say this is pretty good some lines you can tell are rushed but the topic seems to be on point
how long u been keystyling j.w 7.8/10.0
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Re: Hate Me, Hate Hip Hop (Keystyle)

Postby Solace » Oct 6th, '09, 01:22

You've improved a shitload dude..Keep up the keystyling it was pretty nice.
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Re: Hate Me, Hate Hip Hop (Keystyle)

Postby Yah-hah » Oct 6th, '09, 18:36

Yo man it was nice. You geetin pretty good homie keep it up
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Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
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