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Rust came off?

Postby J Roc » Oct 4th, '09, 16:11

i'll Handle u Gay Kids, if i'm pissed-off u'll Get "Big-Shots"... Without Acting all Famous
u Blamming That Lame Shit, That would give me "Minor Damage" Like Cave-In's, Whoaaa
How do i Manage to Stay Thin??? i don't need to "Spell It out" Like i Battle'd Some Mage's
u Should Practise Your Lame scripts, So Many Punchlines i Have An Island Of This
Who Lies On a dick? Ur Mommy-Down-An Has "Rocy-Mountin' " Like i'm Climbing & Shit
Ock-Joking? My Guns After they Blam u they'll "Stop-Smoking" Like they Trying to quit
i see u Acting Cocky? u feeble, u See rocy is evil when u see me u should copy this negro--> :worship:
so much blood i thought Ocky was Emo, Dawg Go Sit Out .. Or will Roc throw him out??
On a team i'm ur "top pick" like ... what the convo's about (topic)
Nukka's Stop Fronting
u got No Weapons.. And worst of all ur spitting the punchline's i spit in 07' (Forreal!)
this Person is served .. If He Wanna Go-Texting? I'll Go-Second Cuz "First is the worst"...
Dawg, J's Perfect! Rest of ya'll Jot Lame Verse's so imma Bomb They Surface
ya'll Need to Let-Go, Cat's Say they Peep "West-Coast" ..but they mean Kanye Surfin'

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Re: Rust came off?

Postby Fa-Q » Oct 4th, '09, 16:27

You always come with it...lol and same with the punchlines...I don't like how you have the capitol letters and lower case letters and the caps...but whatever its your piece but good drop...I liked the no smoking, gun line
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Re: Rust came off?

Postby J Roc » Oct 4th, '09, 16:32

Thanks Q
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Re: Rust came off?

Postby Solace » Oct 5th, '09, 03:34

Damn that was dope..for real im gunna start reading your drops more often cause i got the multies down but shit im no good with punches...Gotta figure out how you do this work haha :worship:
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Re: Rust came off?

Postby gutawafang » Oct 5th, '09, 04:23

exactly as they said, punchlines were great man. :y:
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Re: Rust came off?

Postby J Roc » Oct 5th, '09, 05:15

Thank's guy's :y:
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Re: Rust came off?

Postby Yah-hah » Oct 6th, '09, 18:45

Yeah man I love readin your stuff cause it's always full of crazy punchlines man. Props on the gun quit smokin line was dope. man "i see u Acting Cocky? u feeble, u See rocy is evil when u see me u should copy this negro--> " sick. I dig how you always got like little sayings and stuff at the end of your lines like a little personality thing man always cracks me up (Woah) :p But yeah man keep rockin it homie :worship: :worship: :worship:
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Re: Rust came off?

Postby J Roc » Oct 6th, '09, 20:32

Thanks Yah, i love it when someone like's my stuff , Alway's nice to hear dawggy
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