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It's Dear Practice

Postby Solace » Oct 5th, '09, 23:19

Gotta start on that J Roc style haha...hope you get the weak punches i tried at.

On a higher level, like NASA, I "blast-off" since my rap rocks,
Ya raps soft, lack thought, you blast-off only when you jack off,
You're mad off. Rapper? C'mon, you know you're a gay swinger,
Though I still got them swinging like the crowd on J Springer,
I may figure more out when I'm focused, when I'm spitting right,
But right now I'm "spaced out" like them prawns from District 9,
I have "reasonable doubt" you're winning, like Jay piercin',
You gunna be making "blueprints" to be straight...like JPearson,
And when I work out, I bite-J so then I go "light-weight",
Stick my pen and pad up pussy so that I know my flow "vibrates",
Stay with the past, Slim and Biggie, always ready with knives,
On a further note, like them I stay Ready To Die/Dye,
Ya could wear expensive shit, but a faggot is still what ya appearin',
Leave ya wack ass "Hussain'ed", staying hanging like an earring,
I may start 'em but fuck I guess I also gotta end fights,
Ask for dope, yeah I fill requests but I ain't no fuckin' s3nd!ke.
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Re: It's Dear Practice

Postby classthe_king » Oct 5th, '09, 23:32

hahaha, i liked the punchlines. That was better then what i could do. Keep at it and you'll come along. :y:
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: It's Dear Practice

Postby Spyder » Oct 5th, '09, 23:43

swagger jacka, hahha jk i liked it man
and wtf ever happened to Pearson anyhow :confusion:
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Re: It's Dear Practice

Postby Solace » Oct 6th, '09, 01:15

Thanks guys.

And Scott said that JPearson eventually forgot about this site since he's got a life and all :sweating:
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Re: It's Dear Practice

Postby J Roc » Oct 6th, '09, 02:40

Consistant Sol .... Very Good First Try :y:
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Re: It's Dear Practice

Postby Spyder » Oct 6th, '09, 02:40

well i gues that makes since, i just dont get how people can totally not log on for months...
i mean ya got sumin goin on EVERY second :whistle:
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Re: It's Dear Practice

Postby Solace » Oct 6th, '09, 02:45

Thanks Roc :worship:

And yeah I know but whatever its all good we can do without him :)
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Re: It's Dear Practice

Postby Relapse.LP » Oct 6th, '09, 06:46

J roc wrote:Consistant Sol .... Very Good First Try :y:


Damn, I've always thought your signature line was dope. :worship:

"Writer's Block" like JR's Hood... Dope, haha. Double wordplay. :smoking:

Anyways, great verse, Solace. Tons of multies as usual. :y:
Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/


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Re: It's Dear Practice

Postby Yah-hah » Oct 6th, '09, 18:30

Diggin the multis and the punches man good drop Sol stay solid bro
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: It's Dear Practice

Postby Solace » Oct 6th, '09, 22:33

:worship: Thanks you 3.

Coleon ill check em tonight :y:
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