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Damned Life

Postby Drama Setter » Oct 9th, '09, 09:48

I felt kinda deppresed so I decide to rap about in 1 verse ,lol :sweating:

it's my first verse more than 4 lines , I usually write 2 or 4 lines but this time ...


never understand where your place is in the world
like a flash ,quicker than a wink you become fucking too Old
shit I dont care about that yellow dirty thing you call it the Gold
or the money that you taste it like a honey, wanna spend it or to hold?
every one acts the same way they want their fucking souls to be sold
gotta do sth , thinking about drinking, your life is still too damned and cold
stepping out the bar , walking through the car , my story must've been told
let it slip ,sticking on the strips after I blacked out they see me passed out on the road
bold, fuck this life Ima just Rap about that
yeah I rout it like a scout with no doubt about that

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Re: Damned Life

Postby Wic Kid » Oct 9th, '09, 09:51

Hey man, isnt this ur verse for the collab?! :confusion:
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Re: Damned Life

Postby Drama Setter » Oct 9th, '09, 09:55

Amadeo wrote:flow is completely all over the place. fix it.

other than that, pretty solid. i liked that line about the gold. i can feel your anger permeating from it, so that's good. just keep writing with this emotion but focus more on structure. rap it out loud & you'll see it's really hard to rap it to a beat.


thx bro I'll keep it in my mind

Termin8er wrote:Hey man, isnt this ur verse for the collab?! :confusion:


lol , no I have changed my verse homie , check your inbox out .we all agreed for crazy stuff not emotional ;)
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Re: Damned Life

Postby gutawafang » Oct 9th, '09, 09:57

nice.
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Re: Damned Life

Postby Drama Setter » Oct 9th, '09, 10:04

gutawafang wrote:nice.


thx guta :flower:

Amadeo wrote:where do you guys go to set up collabs? i've been looking, can't find it


you have to PM Fa-Q , he is the leader atm

and here is the topic viewtopic.php?f=9&t=68337&p=871533&hilit=lets+have+a+massive#p871533 :y:
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Re: Damned Life

Postby Yah-hah » Oct 9th, '09, 15:45

Flow was kinda everywhere like Am said but I know when I'm writing emotional stuff I aint even trying to appease nobody just trying to keep some stuff off my chest so I aint trippin man. Keep holdin it down :b: have one on me :p
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Re: Damned Life

Postby Drama Setter » Oct 9th, '09, 15:56

Yah-hah wrote:Flow was kinda everywhere like Am said but I know when I'm writing emotional stuff I aint even trying to appease nobody just trying to keep some stuff off my chest so I aint trippin man. Keep holdin it down :b: have one on me :p


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