Stay Positive (feedback would be appreciated)

[Relapse.LP]

I know life's difficult... God's like cynical, but that's like minimal; your meals taken out your hands and everyday you see rapists.../
Mean racists and Freemasons try to spread the hate... but if you be patient, it'll be worth the wait and together we'll make it/

It looks bleak of course and it reeks of poor... people, the government being deceitful trying to make our lives real different/
I'm bitter and depressed on the outside but my spirit is oppressed and I'm roused wide...awake so my existence has a mission/

Trying to relate to Gandhi, no lying, and make this song be... optimistic but I can't help saying fuck those posse-clique bitches/
In my eyes, I'm wronged and wishin' that suicide is the way out... I just want to prove it's life and say it loud that it bombs and is shit/

Why can't everyone see the glass half-full?... just 'cause gats pull and it's not always laughs, yo, doesn't mean we can have a sad soul/
Keep it positive and see the causative... effects; even if we didn't cause the shit, if it ain't locked and fixed, the war we already lost it, shit.../

Feedback would be appreciated, thanks. I highlighted the phrases that rhyme in different fonts or underlines or bolded or italics in the same bar to make it more clear.

Props to the person who can name the rap song I was listening to before I wrote this.

[Yah-hah]

Yo man I was feelin it. I like the word usage and the bold/italics and stuff helped me keep up with the different rhyme schemes and stuff. so good lookin out. I dig it though man nice raw flow to it. Keep at it homie

[Relapse.LP]

pleaso stop J Roc'n ya shit

please print it reg.

i want to feed but it's so hard to feel it with all that shit on it

where was that from? Trust me, I don't bite J Roc.

Fuck the TRShady server shutdown.

[gutawafang]

I agree with Coleon. It's pretty hard to read. But I see the use of words is pretty dope man.

[J Roc]

pleaso stop J Roc'n ya shit

please print it reg.

i want to feed but it's so hard to feel it with all that shit on it

where was that from? Trust me, I don't bite J Roc.

Fuck the TRShady server shutdown.

you make it hard to read...like J Roc

He's mad cause he can't do whut i do^^

Go Get Ya Own Style, Ya Own Punchlines, And Stop Trying to Be like J, Micheal Cole

Meet MIC Tyson u Might Like Him.. Cuz he wun't bite ya ear off, he'll Bite ya head off

[Fa-Q]

didnt this guy get banned

[Fa-Q]

didnt this guy get banned

yes

lol yea he did that FUCK EVIL GENIUS fake account