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Re: the best verse i've ever written... & the most emotional..

Postby Yah-hah » Oct 9th, '09, 23:07

Amadeo wrote:
Wedlock? More like a fucking headlock

because if first comes love, then comes marriage
Then comes a fucking fetus from a miscarriage
Then comes months of fighting in courts
When your supposed love files for divorce


Yo DOPE drop big homie. the wedlock headlock line was crazy ill. The old school nursery rhyme thing was sick. Dopeness bro stay rockin
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


Nundea Mekeze comin soon May 4th
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Re: the best verse i've ever written... & the most emotional..

Postby FAME » Oct 10th, '09, 20:17

The first two lines caught me, and I HAD to read the rest. :y: I feel the emotion in this piece, and I love emotional stuff :) Can't wait to see more, really I want moreeee.
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