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I love you

Postby Yah-hah » Oct 15th, '09, 02:22

These words of silence scream louder than the sharpest tongue could ever speak,
Just exchanging glances without second chances is all that seems visible to me,
1,000 words still race my mind yet I stay tongue tied,
It's like no matter how much I try I can't speak not one line,
Even the sunshine rays that emit from your smile,
Evaporate in silent clouds after awhile,
But like a child I sit afraid of what all this could mean,
Through the dim-lit smiles of this dim-with child scream such words unseen,
These 3 words hang off the tip of my tongue,
With no where to run they prepare to run,
I..I..I just can't seem to catch hold of my grip,
I'm 1,000 miles high and I just might slip,
God why can't I speak these 3 words on my breath,
Those lips I once loved now scare me to death,
Why can't I just be a man and admit this,
And I don't want to quit this this can't be me finished,
Me teeth keep these words locked in a cage,
It's taken me weeks to do what it would take seconds to say,
Whispers in my head 'don't do it you'll choke',
'She'll just laugh in your face and just say no',
But you have to tell her how she makes your whole world shine,
Unbelievable at times I can't find a line to describe,
Her smile makes even angels hearts stop beating,
Her touch gives me chills till I'm no longer breathing,
Come on just say those simple words on your lips,
That without her kiss you simply cease to exist,
These words are the truest that have ever been on my heart,
Can't imagine us two apart you've had my hand from the start,
These words can't describe how I feel when I think of you,
Just open your eyes beautiful girl cause I love you.
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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AWWWWWW!

Postby eminemgirl1234 » Oct 15th, '09, 15:42

OH MY GOD! THAT'S SO CUTE! OH MY GOD! OH MY GOD! AWWW! :'( :'( :'( :'( :'( :'( :'( :'( :'( THE LAST FEW LINES MADE ME CRY! OH MY GOD! :'( :'( :'( :'( THAT WAS SO SWEET! :worship: :worship: :worship: :worship: PROPZ! BABY BOY, PROPZ! :'( :'( :'( :'( :'( I BET THAT GIRL YOUR TALKING ABOUT, SAYS I LOVE YOU TOO! If she doesn't I'm gonna make her say i love you! Just kidding! That is sooooooooooo cute! :'( :'( :'( :'( :'( Awww!
"Sometimes I feel so alone,
I just don't know, feels like I been down this road before.
So lonely and cold, it's like something takes over me,
soon as I go home and close the door.
Kinda feels like Déjà Vu, I wanna get away from this place I do,
but I can't and I wont say I tried but I know that's a lie cuz I don't,
and why I just don't know...

Malina a.k.a Mickey

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Re: AWWWWWW!

Postby Wic Kid » Oct 15th, '09, 15:52

eminemgirl1234 wrote:OH MY GOD! THAT'S SO CUTE! OH MY GOD! OH MY GOD! AWWW! :'( :'( :'( :'( :'( :'( :'( :'( :'( THE LAST FEW LINES MADE ME CRY! OH MY GOD! :'( :'( :'( :'( THAT WAS SO SWEET! :worship: :worship: :worship: :worship: PROPZ! BABY BOY, PROPZ! :'( :'( :'( :'( :'( I BET THAT GIRL YOUR TALKING ABOUT, SAYS I LOVE YOU TOO! If she doesn't I'm gonna make her say i love you! Just kidding! That is sooooooooooo cute! :'( :'( :'( :'( :'( Awww!


We should really limit the use of smileys... like 5 per post...


On the topic: Real good, Yah. Im feelin it. :y:
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Re: I love you

Postby Drama Setter » Oct 15th, '09, 16:01

propz :worship:
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Re: I love you

Postby Slim Zaddy » Oct 15th, '09, 17:31

wow ,, i loved it man ,,
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Re: I love you

Postby Yah-hah » Oct 15th, '09, 19:38

Thanks everone. eminemgirl hahahahha thanks ma its goin in the book. :) Love the smileys :p dont worry I use em all the time. Term, drama and and zaddy apprecaite it homies
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


Nundea Mekeze comin soon May 4th
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Re: I love you

Postby eminemgirl1234 » Oct 16th, '09, 22:06

Yah-hah wrote:Thanks everone. eminemgirl hahahahha thanks ma its goin in the book. :) Love the smileys :p dont worry I use em all the time. Term, drama and and zaddy apprecaite it homies


Yeah, appercatie! :tounge2:
"Sometimes I feel so alone,
I just don't know, feels like I been down this road before.
So lonely and cold, it's like something takes over me,
soon as I go home and close the door.
Kinda feels like Déjà Vu, I wanna get away from this place I do,
but I can't and I wont say I tried but I know that's a lie cuz I don't,
and why I just don't know...

Malina a.k.a Mickey

"Ignorance is your new best friend!"-Paramore
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