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''Light Work.... iight?''

Postby MC Anonymous » Oct 14th, '09, 04:35

Aiiyo

Damn.. He-Clones my rap, eyes trap to ''See-Tones'' like ''Conch-Shells''
Mean-That Relapse, plus I ''Bleed-Jack'', from the heart till it's ''Not-Swelled (Amadeo..)
This a ''Faq'', ''Eye-Got-Game'' like ''Spiderman'' on all the fuckin' ''Web-Sites'' (Fact)
Yah-Hah ''Get's-Hype'', but couldn't ''get Her'' like She was a ''transvestite!'' (Haaa...)
With Rhymes, this ''Nicca-Teen'' gets ''Smoked On The Ass'' like a ''Cigarette'' (Hell yeah.)
Choke-Pawns-and-Laugh in-a- millisec, this chess, I'm the ''king'', I gotta ''Check-Her-Set''(checker set)
Yeah.. I'm like J-Roc, cause I Slay-Jocks and Spray-Glocks of rhythm at Gay-Flocks
Ahead of my ''Time-Zone'', Stop ''Lines-Cold'', it's like for every planet I ''Ate Watch'' (8 Watches)
I ''Fore-Play'' like Xbox To-Beats, those ''Who-See'' Anonymous can not be Pussy ( 4 measure beats)
No Wonder ''Kitty-Cats'' with Fitted-Caps try to rhyme but their Banished To Me (See Me..)
Try-To-Flow I'll Pry-You-Hoe, throw You in the Flow To Float, shit.. You May-Flower...
I ''Slay-''Cow''ards'', Beef With Me I'll Rip-Teeth, Grip-Sleeves and Drag for like Eight-Hours! (Sleigh)
Send Me To Hell (please), I'll Burn Satan with his Own-Fire, make his Bones-Lighter
a Microphone-Fighter, fuck Punch-Lines, I ''roundhouse'' ''line'' the Mic like a ''Phone Wire''! (Oh Shit)
You Couldn't Bench Press my Light Work, so when I ''Flow Heavy it Might-Hurt
Like Katrina Victims, Hurried-Pain from Hurricanes can make your Psych-Burst

:boxing: Shout Out to J-Roc, and no this wasn't a diss to anyone, was just paying Homage to J-Roc's style.
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: ''Light Work.... iight?''

Postby gutawafang » Oct 14th, '09, 04:38

LMAO LMAO LMAO.

I LMAOed all the way on MSN. It's too fucking WTF insane.

Full ammos!

Full blast!!!

Totally loving the punches. As good as J Roc's. :y: :y: :y:

Keep it coming homie. :worship:
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Re: ''Light Work.... iight?''

Postby MC Anonymous » Oct 14th, '09, 04:43

gutawafang wrote:LMAO LMAO LMAO.

I LMAOed all the way on MSN. It's too fucking WTF insane.

Full ammos!

Full blast!!!

Totally loving the punches. As good as J Roc's. :y: :y: :y:

Keep it coming homie. :worship:

:worship:
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Re: ''Light Work.... iight?''

Postby Relapse.LP » Oct 14th, '09, 04:47

I almost thought J Roc collaborated with you. :y: :y:
Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/


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Re: ''Light Work.... iight?''

Postby MC Anonymous » Oct 14th, '09, 04:49

da.relapse.lp wrote:I almost thought J Roc collaborated with you. :y: :y:

Hahahahaha :y:
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: ''Light Work.... iight?''

Postby Yah-hah » Oct 14th, '09, 06:13

Hahahahah I see it nice homie
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Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
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Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: ''Light Work.... iight?''

Postby J Roc » Oct 14th, '09, 19:04

Hahahaha ... :y:1 :y:2 :y:3 Thumbs up homie
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Re: ''Light Work.... iight?''

Postby classthe_king » Oct 14th, '09, 23:00

Like the way this came out...even though that line still makes no sense :shifty:

This line was crazy:
a Microphone-Fighter, fuck Punch-Lines, I ''roundhouse'' ''line'' the Mic like a ''Phone Wire''!
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Re: ''Light Work.... iight?''

Postby MC Anonymous » Oct 15th, '09, 00:04

:worship: :worship: :worship: :worship: :worship: Thanks homies.
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: ''Light Work.... iight?''

Postby macdaddy019967 » Oct 16th, '09, 08:07

U never dissapoint goods hit anon
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Re: ''Light Work.... iight?''

Postby Solace » Oct 18th, '09, 05:32

Damn bro nice! I bet I didnt even get some of the inner punches your crazy mind comes up with.
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