It's Ro$$y! [verse two]

[lilrossy]

down and gritty, its that brizzy city kiddie with weapons with me, so beware,
no time to spare, on a mission to be a milli, a milli, a milli, millionare,
fucking swear, my ambition kept me free from a cell, like solitare,
grew up fast, listenin to fiddy, watchin sluts suck willies in me video player,
call me weezy, the way i feed on deez beats, my cds speed thru streets,
succeeds easy, customers so satisfied after buy, they throw reciepts,
after release, be in a black jeep, friends fightin ova me like a front seat,
ima beast, elite rapper set to sweep the streets and put u bitches to sleep,
this week which is it? east or west, north or south, here comes the grouch,
i feast on and digest the best, im sick and wicked, so shut ya mouth,
now! cuz ima shark and u's a trout, fuckin dickwits, i'll eat ya hearts out, (huh)
dumb it down for ya, ima constent ouch, i never stop, call me monobrow,
i Know right, how do i do it, spit lines of rhymes so fuckin fluent,
i flow like fluid, keepin ya'll lewered into my music, cuz im the truest,
i was the cool kid, always truant from school, they said that i couldnt do it, (look at me)
to every coward who doubted, ya'll can lick my dick, ima winner, i say it proudly.

[gutawafang]

Nice constant multis.

[lilrossy]

thanx man. been practicin me multi's.

[eminemgirl1234]

Nice.

[lilrossy]

it was a decent drop, nice rhymes, but, i dont really understand about the multies, there is like none

except for this this

this week which is it? east or west, north or south, here comes the grouch,
i feast on and digest the best, im sick and wicked, so shut ya mouth,

not being a bitch lol just saying i hardly see like any multies really, just inner rhymes, feel free to prove me wrong showing me some if there is, im real sleepy anyway

but yea it was decent, flow was nice, some nice lines in there, there were a good amount of inner rhymes
from other stuff i've read i do see your improving, keep it up

learn multies or just keep doing them better..cuz i swear i only see that one multie haha two word rhymes aint exactly multies..like truent do-it music too-sick..
not a big deal anyway they just really help for the lyrical-ness

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tell me what you think of mine if you have the time
it has bolded multies btw maybe it can help you in someway lol

thanx man. i thought multies was just multiple rhymes in a bar, whether it was using 2 or more rhyming words, or the way u used them, but im probly wrong, so thnx for clearing that up for me. thanx for the feedbak man, thats why i post shit.

Nice.

thanx, im glad u liked it.

[eminemgirl1234]

Me too.