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Warm Up

Postby J Roc » Oct 18th, '09, 23:51

Boring Ass Day i got a battle due tho ... Warm up :y:

Bitch behave ... Half Ya'll Stalking-Me U'd Prally "Follow-Me" Without a Twitter Page
I Can See Thru-Ur-Writtins Cuz i Got "Super-vision" Like Im Making Sure These Kid's Is Safe
Roccy Get Upset?? If i Steal Gingerale & Visit-Jail I'll be the One On Top Of The Bunk Bed
If u Dropping it Com-plex? Who Your-Wifin? The "Whore-Risin" Like im Watching the Sunset
& if This Next Kid Dropped? Don't Look
Cause Only Time "Sticcy Important" Was When i put it in my Notebook
Was That Diss Text? Now Roccy's gonna "Diss Banned Members".. Like Dipset?? (Disband Members)
I'm Sick With The Bar's , & The Clips-ah-Shift "In-Ya-Skin" Like Pimples & Scars
i May-Talk but whenever "J-Walk" U'll Get Hit By a Car
This Could Be a 5 year old Vs Illmaculate
I COuld Fire-Slug's Make u "Lighten-Up" Like Happy Kid's
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Re: Warm Up

Postby Just Silver » Oct 23rd, '09, 01:10

liking this shit especially the first bars like the"supervision" line ive been here for a while and know what to expect always some new ill punch uve got a great chance
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Re: Warm Up

Postby Solace » Oct 23rd, '09, 02:01

Nice shit bro I loved the punches and multies keep it up :worship:
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Re: Warm Up

Postby gutawafang » Oct 23rd, '09, 02:47

Loving the inverted commas. :shifty:
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Re: Warm Up

Postby classthe_king » Oct 23rd, '09, 03:37

nice dude :worship: The punches were crazy, loved that thing about sticcy. You mind checkin out my verse? :y:
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