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All these fucking labels.

Postby Relapse.LP » Oct 23rd, '09, 07:37

Major props to GZA for this idea. One of the dopest concepts ever, mad respect...

These rappers ain't phat like they DEF of JAM... or AFTERMATH/
Making fast money like ROC-A-FELLA to get the flow; matter-of-fact/
Motherfuckers possess SHADY business to get the airplay/
Can't DEATH ROW to safety, with or without the stairway/
So INTER-SCOPE like hip hop scientists... we not buying this/
Fake ass FOLLY-PARK or whatever other posing lying spits/
We BAD BOY while DISTURBIN' THE PEACE like the Bubonic Plague/
Getting high as SMOKE-A-LOT 'cause we rocking out to Chronic plays/
So RUTHLESS we just UNIVERSAL, dominating URBANIZM MUSIC/
Not on some UPTOWN corny shit... the mic is burning; use it/
WU-TANG ain't nothing to F with, neither is ILL WILL cold like winter/
Call yourself YOUNG MONEY but your raps are already old like printers/
It's hip hop's ICE AGE, as Nas worded the EPIDEMIC correctly/
Got fans from the Pacific to ATLANTIC... BATTLE AXES murder mercilessly/
Nah, this ain't G-UNIT, or whoever fake-ass Game wants to diss/
300 Bars and runnin'? It was a matter of time before a rapper starts to flip/
Rhmyes TOPNOTCH; fuck RUFFRYDERS... shoot you with a tough SNIPER/
CASH MONEY, fast money, whatever... world know you're just a liar/
Taking it to the NEXT PLATEAU; so EXCEPTIONAL like DOGGYSTYLE/
Shit, 1993 is 16 years ago... but biters pounce when they saw my style/
1ST AND 15TH ENTERTAINMENT is fresh off the boat like Lupe Fiasco/
Rappin' with JIVE, no creativity like MOTOWN... gotta say you whack though/

I capitalized all hip hop labels, to get an idea. This was just for fun. Feedback? :flower:
Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/


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Re: All these fucking labels.

Postby gutawafang » Oct 23rd, '09, 08:10

Fucking clever. :y:
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Re: All these fucking labels.

Postby Relapse.LP » Oct 24th, '09, 00:50

gutawafang wrote:Fucking clever. :y:


Thanks. GZA deserves the props though. :y:
Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/


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Re: All these fucking labels.

Postby Relapse.LP » Oct 24th, '09, 05:27

More feedback? :sweating:
Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/


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