Just kick it

[shabbymind]

This is not brilliant but it aint either stupid
This is not complex but you knew i was gonna say not simple so its awkaward to say not simple
I just kick it and the patern i used to rhyme till here doesnt work here
This is just weird...no theme..i sound like eminemgirl1234
when she did that post call Stupid phone call
i just kick it give me a shoe and a traget
And il lstart a fuckin riot..i sound like eminem god damn it
god sorry i am sinner i have bit over the better
shit its absurd cuz even if i suck its still a good verse
marshall minded fuckin ouija borad got my typin dumb thing off my pc board
so i just kick it..open a threah freestyle and just post it
im dumb enough to wear a red bandana and cheer for the crips
Smart enough to stop mark my hood and take a piss
Positive enough to call my brain damage a holly gift
im catholic but when the preacher fall down in from of me i just kick him
see that ferrari i need attention so just kick it
sick sick sick 3 time sicker then a guy sayin he is sick thrice
i only act i dont think twice
im so hot that im probably the only one that can drink ice
dont give me a beat cuz you know i will have to just kck it

[SlmShady200]

Not bad.

[gutawafang]

I don't see much rhyming. It's more like reading than rapping when I'm reading it. You dig?

Keep improving man.