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Postby shabbymind » Oct 22nd, '09, 18:27

ok, Trshady 45 fan post forum
yall talking about holding pistols
Well im letting my ammo go for yall shit yo
Talking like every single bitch here
is gonna be the biggst coming out this year
Aahah yall jokes are making me laugh
I never tought a forum could get this queer
write shit and Asking for props,
Wy the fuck would someone say its good when its not
Plus yall acting like ..hey be honnest doin the comments
But yall trip the fuck out when we go there was nothing decent on this
I think i got you guys crushed,, yall just wanna dream but you suck
rhymin about Nike... when yall just cant do it
Talkin about flow when theres nothing fluid
It looks like yall practicing typin on your keyboard
and each time i think a shit is bad then i see worst
Its alright tryna follow the same path as Marshall
But there aint no art here,,no MC is kickin sur aint no martial
Almost sounds like the UFO is here..aare theese guy really martians ?
Aaha im so funny sound like a young stev-e martin
Imma leave yall with an advice, dont quit rap..just forget it
Unless yall dont want to be forbided for all the sins committed
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Re: fuckin fake assez

Postby eminemgirl1234 » Oct 22nd, '09, 22:30

No comment.
"Sometimes I feel so alone,
I just don't know, feels like I been down this road before.
So lonely and cold, it's like something takes over me,
soon as I go home and close the door.
Kinda feels like Déjà Vu, I wanna get away from this place I do,
but I can't and I wont say I tried but I know that's a lie cuz I don't,
and why I just don't know...

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Re: good!!!!

Postby eminemgirl1234 » Oct 24th, '09, 16:41



Ohmigod! So cute! Wait a minute...uh...
"Sometimes I feel so alone,
I just don't know, feels like I been down this road before.
So lonely and cold, it's like something takes over me,
soon as I go home and close the door.
Kinda feels like Déjà Vu, I wanna get away from this place I do,
but I can't and I wont say I tried but I know that's a lie cuz I don't,
and why I just don't know...

Malina a.k.a Mickey

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Re: fuckin fake assez

Postby gutawafang » Oct 26th, '09, 09:50

Chah. Don't respond to bots lest it be more troublesome for the mod.

Anyways, this is not that good man. I know you trying to diss some people here. but it didnt work out for me imo.
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Re: fuckin fake assez

Postby eminemgirl1234 » Oct 26th, '09, 15:55

gutawafang wrote:Chah. Don't respond to bots lest it be more troublesome for the mod.

Anyways, this is not that good man. I know you trying to diss some people here. but it didnt work out for me imo.


Thanx!

And I agree with gutawafang, yeah, doesn't work on the greastest rappers ever on this shit! including me...nah, not me... don't know how to rap, just love eminem!
"Sometimes I feel so alone,
I just don't know, feels like I been down this road before.
So lonely and cold, it's like something takes over me,
soon as I go home and close the door.
Kinda feels like Déjà Vu, I wanna get away from this place I do,
but I can't and I wont say I tried but I know that's a lie cuz I don't,
and why I just don't know...

Malina a.k.a Mickey

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Re: good!!!!

Postby B.A.D. » Oct 27th, '09, 03:48



the best feed i've seen on c.w. :worship: :worship: :worship:

I'll take that in advice for future songs :y: , thanks
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Re: fuckin fake assez

Postby classthe_king » Oct 27th, '09, 03:55

gutawafang wrote:Chah. Don't respond to bots lest it be more troublesome for the mod.

Anyways, this is not that good man. I know you trying to diss some people here. but it didnt work out for me imo.


Yeah this was just horrible.
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: fuckin fake assez

Postby Solace » Oct 27th, '09, 03:58

That was pretty shitty.
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