couple bars of something im workin on

[spitz2]

not much, just some lines n want some opinions on how it is

i sip liqour n brew with a lit swisher its true/
makes me spit sicker than you dick lickers can do/
allow me to give you a quick list of the rules/
diss members of my crew n im dismemberin you/
shit is all over once his temper is through/
im bound to see red like when a wrist slitter is blue/


im tryin to keep the syllable goin....so...??

[classthe_king]

Rhymes are pretty good.