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Postby mcZu » Oct 19th, '09, 19:42

Nike Boots, instrumental used.

See, son.. I make ya fall when ya try to pass me
And I’m not talking about using the-rake like the wheelchair kid from degrassi
It’s classy the way I spit sick shit cal it Yale
The way this animal drops them bars you would swear Zu was a jail
Like I wear ill arresting equipment I rock them cuffed jeans
Attacking me is playing with fire you better of being cuffed to Jean
I mean it seems you’re full of shit either way
‘cause when you say your girl is giving you migraine
You actually mean my seed when I came on her sideways
See, I cook weak rappers and refer to the act as Friday
I left doctors screaming mayday on April seven
That confused ‘cause they got a feeling from heaven
‘cause I have an Arabic culture to back up Zu
I leave you on the run like graffiti ‘cause I’m tagging you
I’m asking you if you can compete with my spiky roots
‘Till then I’ll leave ‘em deciphering my verse on Nike boots...
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Re: Nike Boots

Postby shabbymind » Oct 19th, '09, 19:48

mcZu wrote:Nike Boots, instrumental used.

See, son.. I make ya fall when ya try to pass me
And I’m not talking about using the-rake like the wheelchair kid from degrassi
It’s classy the way I spit sick shit cal it Yale
The way this animal drops them bars you would swear Zu was a jail
Like I wear ill arresting equipment I rock them cuffed jeans
Attacking me is playing with fire you better of being cuffed to Jean
I mean it seems you’re full of shit either way
‘cause when you say your girl is giving you migraine
You actually mean my seed when I came on her sideways
See, I cook weak rappers and refer to the act as Friday
I left doctors screaming mayday on April seven
That confused ‘cause they got a feeling from heaven
‘cause I have an Arabic culture to back up Zu
I leave you on the run like graffiti ‘cause I’m tagging you
I’m asking you if you can compete with my spiky roots
‘Till then I’ll leave ‘em deciphering my verse on Nike boots...




Why do yall need to like kill or or diss fictive poeple.....stop it lol or rhyming about your all the best



say something else lol.... but it was good lol...its just repetitive
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Re: Nike Boots

Postby mcZu » Oct 19th, '09, 19:50

^None of them are fictive, alot of people hate me 'cause they're jealous. But thanks anyways.
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Re: Nike Boots

Postby SajN » Oct 19th, '09, 19:51

mcZu wrote:^None of them are fictive, alot of people hate me 'cause they're jealous. But thanks anyways.

YOU SUCK!
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Re: Nike Boots

Postby mcZu » Oct 19th, '09, 19:52

SajN wrote:
mcZu wrote:^None of them are fictive, alot of people hate me 'cause they're jealous. But thanks anyways.

YOU SUCK!


Example #1 :whistle:
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Re: Nike Boots

Postby SajN » Oct 19th, '09, 19:54

Nah, you know I am playing :flower: :whistle:


It was dope, but yeah, I wish it wasn't the same kinda topic all the time.
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Re: Nike Boots

Postby shabbymind » Oct 19th, '09, 19:54

oh i see looooooool........ just funny...because i ddont get how can poeple do really can hate someone virtually.. i mean all u see are words...ummm..they should learn abotu self control lol
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Re: Nike Boots

Postby mcZu » Oct 19th, '09, 19:56

SajN wrote:Nah, you know I am playing :flower: :whistle:


It was dope, but yeah, I wish it wasn't the same kinda topic all the time.

I knew you were, lol, and thanks.
shabbymind wrote:oh i see looooooool........ just funny...because i ddont get how can poeple do really can hate someone virtually.. i mean all u see are words...ummm..they should learn abotu self control lol

Naah, I don't care about E-haters.. I'm talking 'bout real life, and this is the way I vent.
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Re: Nike Boots

Postby Emadyville » Oct 19th, '09, 21:06

If this was you talking bout how good you are, you shouldn't write shit that makes you sound terrible, not to be an asshole but I thought this lacked everything, including even decent rhymes :n:
Menzo wrote:Its cuz you're dope and Daddy Dubs. No one fucks with that


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Re: Nike Boots

Postby mcZu » Oct 19th, '09, 21:41

Emadyville wrote:If this was you talking bout how good you are, you shouldn't write shit that makes you sound terrible, not to be an asshole but I thought this lacked everything, including even decent rhymes :n:

Every feedback is appreciated, so thanks.
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Re: Nike Boots

Postby Emadyville » Oct 19th, '09, 23:03

mcZu wrote:
Emadyville wrote:If this was you talking bout how good you are, you shouldn't write shit that makes you sound terrible, not to be an asshole but I thought this lacked everything, including even decent rhymes :n:

Every feedback is appreciated, so thanks.


I was just saying, if you do a verse like that you have to be better, I'm glad you understood that, at least shows you respect what I have to say :y:
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Re: Nike Boots

Postby mcZu » Oct 19th, '09, 23:17

^Yeah, no problem. I always respect peoples opinion if they have solid arguments, and I can see where you're coming from. I just focused on wordplay and punchlines and pretty much neglected the complexity of the rhyme scheme. I just love laying down lines on beats like that for fun. :y:
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Re: Nike Boots

Postby gutawafang » Oct 20th, '09, 03:19

I mean it seems you’re full of shit either way
‘cause when you say your girl is giving you migraine
You actually mean my seed when I came on her sideways
See, I cook weak rappers and refer to the act as Friday

That was the best.

And keep it coming man. I loved it. :flower:
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Re: Nike Boots

Postby AliJack » Oct 25th, '09, 17:20

Brag raps, people, shabby whatever lol.
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Re: Nike Boots

Postby mcZu » Oct 28th, '09, 23:31

Thanks y'all
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