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Postby D'Leh » Oct 29th, '09, 02:43

my shit stays fresh like its in saran wrap
call it saran rap, wordplay, prolly cant stand that
so activate hate all day, just discriminate
it seems i like gotta eliminate the greats
just to gain aproval from fakes, for fuck sake
wait... i carry the belt for the heavy weight title
call me steve irwin, im an expert on survival
people say im blessed i guess i belong in the bible
just 1 line is vital, it might kill your brain
stop the blood in your veins, and still no blame
the way i kill you lames got you thinkin thats its voodoo
"Mr. untouchable diss" didnt you see that shit on youtube?
FREEing the WORLD, this lyrical surgeon is POPPA DOC
not scared to pop a glock, n even though i aint got a clock
il tell you what time it is n tell you that ya gotta walk
because on line will beat ya, i know its not alot !!!
:whistle:
Let me eat your pussy while I shave you!
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Re: random shit!!!

Postby Emadyville » Oct 29th, '09, 03:55

loved the wordplay part in the beginning made me laugh :y:

you realize steve irwin died right? killed by a sting-ray, so the whole survival line doesn't make sense, i enjoyed this piece tho :y:
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Re: random shit!!!

Postby classthe_king » Oct 29th, '09, 04:35

Emadyville wrote:loved the wordplay part in the beginning made me laugh :y:

you realize steve irwin died right? killed by a sting-ray, so the whole survival line doesn't make sense, i enjoyed this piece tho :y:


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