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Flying Cars ft. Fa-Q

Postby Yah-hah » Oct 20th, '09, 07:17

(Yah-hah)
I flew the car off the edge of this cliff,
The edge of this bridge is ripped by the pledge of this kiss,
Blessed by this miss so I drift away in the music,
I grab it and use it before I happen to lose it,
I'm attracted with true gifts distracted by movement,
Useless, I'll prove it just turn up the mic quick,
And I might spit right quick at the end of my night shift,
At the end of my daybreak my fake traits beginning to take shape,
I hate great I'm legendary its oh so scary so fake wait,
What is it I'm saying what am I speaking,
these dragons I'm slaying these eagles I'm leaving,
It happens just maybe with these people I'm seeing,
I'm speaking such words of encouragement,
Worshipin the nourishment I'm workin with,
My purpose is worthless I say that it's worth the risk,
Running through the working fence even though my shirt is ripped,

I'm flying far from both my wishes and my dreams,
Flying from her kisses and her things,
But I left my wishlist back home I've already packed the flyin car,
So with fingers crossed I'm wishin side by side with a flying star,

(Yah-hah)
I'm workin in hell stuck in a cell with the worst of them,
Burnt my skin just sittin on the sun,
Shifted on the one that was written on my tongue,
Clip is in the gun but my aim is off it seems,
Trapped in the bottom scream like 'get off of me',
Possibly, I'm awfully creative,
No structure or cuss words but with bombing schemes to play with,
With addictive flows rippin and cripplin those wicked foes,
Twisted misfit critic shows,
with the sickness (woah)I'm gifted though pause it for the simple pros,
I'll just sit back and wait for them to catch up,
I'll save everyone on TR but shootin the rest up,
Wait that was a mess up forget it thats my bad,
I live with my eyes closed tryin to forget about my past,
3 lines above tree lines have felt all of my wrath,
It's my path but I can't run it alone,
Wish my family was here but I'm runnin from home,
And I've been runnin for days,
Accomplished nothing this way I don't have one thing to say,

I'm flying far from both my wishes and my dreams,
Flying from her kisses and her things,
But I left my wishlist back home I've already packed the flyin car,
So with fingers crossed I'm wishin side by side with a flying star,

(Fa-Q)
My flying cars, are redundant like dying scars,
Like Midas' golden hands buying bars,
Or like if Venus lost her temper, and started fighting mars,
My flying cars are like a swarm of bees,
When people go to hell, do the have warm knees,
I ask for a world without form please,
I live Genesis one zero,
There I'm treated like a god, like a suicidals, and a guns their hero,
A bullet there a escape, the barrel their clear portal,
Only proving, they're just a mere mortal,
So when do flying cars, meet dying
stars,
Space is infinite like the blue ocean,
Never stopping, like smooth motion,
Flying like space ships,
Flying like a coin flips, but my face slips,
The blood from nose, helps my tongue taste lips,
And I land face down, I taste ground,
For once I would like light, to chase sound,

I'm flying far from both my wishes and my dreams,
Flying from her kisses and her things,
But I left my wishlist back home I've already packed the flyin car,
So with fingers crossed I'm wishin side by side with a flying star,
Last edited by Yah-hah on Oct 20th, '09, 08:54, edited 1 time in total.
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

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Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Flying Cars ft. Fa-Q

Postby Fa-Q » Oct 20th, '09, 07:33

Hey Jus you should say which verse is mine,,,I think this is one of our better songs...the concept is a little weird but other than that...three solid verses, good hook, and kept the multis
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Re: Flying Cars ft. Fa-Q

Postby macdaddy019967 » Oct 20th, '09, 07:37

No structure or cuss words but with bombing schemes to play with,
With addictive flows rippin and cripplin those wicked foes,
Twisted misfit critic shows,
with the sickness (woah)I'm gifted though pause it for the simple pros,


don't know who wrote this part but i liked it :y:
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Re: Flying Cars ft. Fa-Q

Postby Yah-hah » Oct 20th, '09, 08:54

macdaddy019967 wrote:
No structure or cuss words but with bombing schemes to play with,
With addictive flows rippin and cripplin those wicked foes,
Twisted misfit critic shows,
with the sickness (woah)I'm gifted though pause it for the simple pros,


don't know who wrote this part but i liked it :y:


Yeah that was me. Good lookin out homie
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Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Flying Cars ft. Fa-Q

Postby Fa-Q » Oct 20th, '09, 13:54

Yea Jus that part is dope
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Re: Flying Cars ft. Fa-Q

Postby eminemgirl1234 » Oct 20th, '09, 16:13

Nice callob. :y:
"Sometimes I feel so alone,
I just don't know, feels like I been down this road before.
So lonely and cold, it's like something takes over me,
soon as I go home and close the door.
Kinda feels like Déjà Vu, I wanna get away from this place I do,
but I can't and I wont say I tried but I know that's a lie cuz I don't,
and why I just don't know...

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Re: Flying Cars ft. Fa-Q

Postby Fa-Q » Oct 20th, '09, 16:27

Thanks Emsgirl
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Re: Flying Cars ft. Fa-Q

Postby Fa-Q » Oct 20th, '09, 20:48

Damn Just I really like the hook
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Re: Flying Cars ft. Fa-Q

Postby Yah-hah » Oct 20th, '09, 23:21

Fa-Q wrote:Damn Just I really like the hook


Yeah I do to. I just kinda came up with it on the spot
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Flying Cars ft. Fa-Q

Postby gutawafang » Oct 21st, '09, 01:20

HAHA

I thought this was a cheat code to GTA San Andreas thread.

I prefer FA-Q's verse but both is still dope.

I'd give a 7 overall too.

Flying like space ships,
Flying like a coin flips, but my face slips,
The blood from nose, helps my tongue taste lips, :y:
Though that seems random, I liked it.
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Re: Flying Cars ft. Fa-Q

Postby Fa-Q » Oct 21st, '09, 02:27

Thanks Coleon and Fish
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Re: Flying Cars ft. Fa-Q

Postby Fa-Q » Oct 21st, '09, 04:34

I think my verse might fit better second instead of third jus
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Re: Flying Cars ft. Fa-Q

Postby Yah-hah » Oct 21st, '09, 18:07

Fa-Q wrote:I think my verse might fit better second instead of third jus


Yeah probably I just trrew it together really quick was in a hurry :sweating:
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Flying Cars ft. Fa-Q

Postby Tash8 » Oct 29th, '09, 23:52

this kinda reminds me of the Instrumental by Lupe Fiasco, the rhyme scheme is cool..

not bad guys... Fa-Q good verse, i liked ur scheme
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Re: Flying Cars ft. Fa-Q

Postby Fa-Q » Oct 30th, '09, 06:59

Thanks Tash
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