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Postby Xray » Oct 30th, '09, 07:53

Wrote this on my way back home on the train. Came back from court so I had the fuck the system state of mind lol. Feed will be returned if you want. :y:

Divisions stand aside, solo caught in my mind
Contradictions fall behind, hollow thoughts have certified
Need no lies to ride with I, need no hope to crucify
Fed of life at tide of times, success is low cause I don't try
Earning-less, but do I condone? Do I concern?
In slave for this so called price to burn?
"We'll do the paying, and you help us roam"
In this so cold society, each be his own
Yet no freedom, only bulls and turns
"We do the teachings, we decide who learns
We'll be the judges, we'll keep you adjourned
For a crime you've committed, so little it concerns
You've got us all wrong, we don't interest from your crime
But the point is we divine, and align from a 3 sided sign"
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I speak literally, figuratively, the prophet gone


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Re: New Piece

Postby Tranquil » Oct 30th, '09, 08:00

good shit man :worship:
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Re: New Piece

Postby AOBrien09 » Oct 30th, '09, 14:14

nice drop, like the message in this also you nice inner ryhme's, an flow as good too.
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Re: New Piece

Postby classthe_king » Oct 30th, '09, 16:04

haha good shit, i can tell you wrote this on the way back from court.
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Re: New Piece

Postby BILI » Oct 30th, '09, 20:42

Yeah I can feel this drop,its dope,some good rhymes,and flow was awesome 2

If you want 2 feed back
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Re: New Piece

Postby Wic Kid » Oct 30th, '09, 20:52

It was good. You flow was great at the beginnin, but in the middle of the verse you kinda fell off with the flow. And then on the end it flowed nicely again. Rhymes were good too.

Anyway, it was dope. :y:
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Re: New Piece

Postby Xray » Oct 31st, '09, 02:15

Props for the feed. :b:
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Re: New Piece

Postby gutawafang » Oct 31st, '09, 09:57

Wow. :o

I love the vocabulary bank you have!!! :worship:
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