Titration

[eminemgirl1234]

Haven't you ever wanted
to distill yourself?
To take part of you and
do like you did in middle-school chemistry?
Boil away the iniquities, the insecurities,
the pettiness, and spitefulness,
evaporate the haterd, and then
To take what's left,
the quintessential salt that will not be cast out,
and cast it over the ones you love, saying
"This is who I am."

[gutawafang]

hahaha. I've read too many poems to conclude that what you wrote here is just another poem but with some words changed.

however, i liked the concept and the idea. it's a good try.

[MC Anonymous]

hahaha. I've read too many poems to conclude that what you wrote here is just another poem but with some words changed.

however, i liked the concept and the idea. it's a good try.

Exposed. Sit the fuck down hoe and take notes, learn to write your own stuff.
Good job Fish.

[Solace]

You took a good poem and made it complete garbage.