Moonlight Sonata

[mcZu]

Moon reflects the sun so the shards are a sharp mess
Now the other half gets illuminated through the darkness
So my sharpness seems to be stuck in its own twilight
The sun abandoned me yet I seem to obtain twice the light
Indirectly through reflection while I’m gasping I ice the light
Frozen, it seems right ‘cause now it won’t go rogue
However, it’s melting from the inside and I seem to have no hope
Clever, yet a disaster that rather slows down in time
But my mind is faster so I’m stuck doing time and now I mind
It doesn’t even matter ‘cause if it did I wouldn’t mind
But it doesn’t so I feel the urge to address the limelight behind
The façade that is set to be viewed in a timeless hindsight
So in my mind it’s viewed as a sightless kind side of violence
The line between a genius and a psychopath is a string on a violin
So via my eye lens I expand my view on top of Babylon
The tower reaching for heaven; the top, is that what I am on?
I am hung, but no strings attached so it’s getting colder
The higher I get the darker it seems and I get no solar
So when the dawn breaks this portrait breaks and it’s all over

[Emadyville]

I like it, good vocab, seemed to flow very well, great drop

[classthe_king]

Rhymes were good, flowed nice. Vocab was dope, learned some new words. Usual Zu Piece.

[mcZu]

I like it, good vocab, seemed to flow very well, great drop

Thanks Emadyville, appreciate it.

Rhymes were good, flowed nice. Vocab was dope, learned some new words. Usual Zu Piece.

Thanks, appreciate it, and I'm glad I could help improve your vocabulary.

[embm]

I like it, good vocab, seemed to flow very well, great drop

yep

[mcZu]

^Thanks.