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Short Keystyle

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Short Keystyle

Postby AOBrien09 » Nov 1st, '09, 01:55

Kick it, kill it but you know a would never destroy this,
don't believe like a athiest am'a make you annoyed and pissed,
for thinkin that kinda thought an show you lot,
the kinda skill a got, a blind ya when a get rollin who's not,
impressed, dim wit, am blessed, it's just envy ain't it,
that a kinda got slim's wit, that's why plenty hate it,
but am used to being this monster you think I am,
the kinda guy who shot ya like that diddy an biggie jam,
a like to write subliminal's confuse you like a anagram,
throwin roc's an cuttin you open while you scream "am your fan",
with all that bling on look's like am diamond cutting in amsterdam,
you gonna get drowned soon as a let the hydrant's open an the dam,
is gonna flood up, the dam methporically being your brain,
overloaded with lyric's that you can't handle, seeing a change,
the way you act, ya spirit's seem dismantled now ya being all derranged,

bored so just randomly wrote stuff in like 5mins :sleeping:
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Re: Short Keystyle

Postby Just Silver » Nov 1st, '09, 03:19

seemed like it didnt flow for me overall its alright but never seen any of your other work so have nothing to compare to ya know more multis wouldve been better
spottin
should def put out some more keystyles though :y:
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