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Third General Keystyle

Postby mcZu » Nov 1st, '09, 21:41

I'm back at it again, with no pen
Just a keyboard, the key word is bored
Like the tool you use to open a door and Hawk equipement
It's Sherlock the lochness monster equiped with
Cryptic past crib like sickness twisted in a crissis shift stick
Shifting through the words that's I explode
And y'all X out like a press conference that's 'bout to implode
Then I proceed like a professional pornstar
To kill beats since the day I was born with bars
It's that what makes me a perfect emcee I don't spit 'bout stupide shit like Celie
See I'm 'bout to fuck y'all up like intercourse on a ceiling
Ofcourse I'm not mean I'm just me see
I mean I'm keen and able llike brother of cain
To kill the whore-ratio like CSI mayne
See, I is I and who knows my mouth is hearing that shit daym
Yes, I'm tasting sound, pause
The cause of this bezerk spazzing is y'all ignorance 'cause
I ignite to rant and then vent and the rent a ransom at random
Still with me? Or should I lend 'em? I'm talking about my fly shit
Pilot like a first episode I make y'all stop sleeping on me like opened up eye lids
It's no Crooked I, bitch, but I still see al those whores-shoe-gangs
Pump ready? Naah, fuck a gun, I'm the one who'll bang
No need for heat 'cause I spit that, yes, indeed
Check how I charge head on and I'm not talking about payment slips
leave y'all in the pavement, shit
Now you rep the streets, bitch, it's me that kills beats with sick
Slick tricks but no fraud, don't call me a con 'cause this aint konvict records
Stop talking 'bout spraying like aiming for armpits, I wreck and hurt
That's why I leave y'all blue like blood with out oxygen
Head south in Rotterdam? You might catch this ock with a pen
Jotting rhymes on the corner, though I can do it without one too
Everything I'm saying is super, call my rhymes san goku
Y'all in the lowest lane, I'm cruising on the highway
No Kryptonian but in the future you can say Zu blew up like cribs with a dynamite
Dipped in plutonium that high when I look down I can spot pluto when I sigh-a-night
like poison I glow some and demand some more like ransom
I remember when y'all used to ran some laps at random
Yes, I recycled the same rhymes in the same keystyle like I give a fuck
It's a given that I spit it from the heart
Nope, not frozen or viagra pumped yet I did that shit precise on this sight from the very start
See, the Generals, these men straight, like female periods
Y'all couldn't beat us like female masturbation, we never fail, period...

That's it for today.
"Truth is limitless in its range; if you drop a 'T' and look at it in reverse, it could hurt."
- Lupe Fiasco

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Re: Third General Keystyle

Postby Yah-hah » Nov 2nd, '09, 20:45

HA I dig it zu. Kinda my flow-type so I got it. Nice little keystyle
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Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
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Re: Third General Keystyle

Postby Wic Kid » Nov 2nd, '09, 20:49

I fuckin loved it :worship:

Especially this part:

Like the tool you use to open a door and Hawk equipement
It's Sherlock the lochness monster equiped with
Cryptic past crib like sickness twisted in a crissis shift stick
Shifting through the words that's I explode

Great job. :y:
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Re: Third General Keystyle

Postby mcZu » Nov 2nd, '09, 21:50

Thanks Yah and Wic. :b:
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