Make It Rain

[lilrossy]

im jack the ripper, u ain't fuckin jack shit,
im out ta get ya, make u draw blood cuz u act crip,
never on sum wack shit, dis beat's so phat, got back tits,
its goin down, im no chris brown but i smack bitch,
thats it, spit shit so hot, press play wearin' oven mitts,
dis ain't been seen b4, like ugly chicks covered bits,
i smother kicks, rip shit so quick, only wiegh a brick,
but bitch, no doubt, get knocked out if u say im shit,
i aint playin bitch, there's competitors but its no game,
i proclaim, ur fuckin dead bitch, im an open flame,
dis mics a spray can, and when i sgueeze, will u feel pain?
bitch please, u gon burn at 500 degreez like lil wayne,
ive sealed my name in the main frame of raps domain,
how did i obtain my position at the top of the chain?
ya'll act strange with suspicions, how do i explain,
when im on the mic i must hit dew point bcuz i make it rain.

[gutawafang]

I didn't like it. No offense.

but the rhyme scheme is fabulous.

[lilrossy]

dont just say you didnt like it, if ur gonna cirtisize, at least give sum feedbak and advice. thats why people post there shit up here, to get sum feed so they can improve.

[gutawafang]

dont just say you didnt like it, if ur gonna cirtisize, at least give sum feedbak and advice. thats why people post there shit up here, to get sum feed so they can improve.

Ok man. sorry bout that.

Out of 10
Structure- 9
Multis- 9
Rhymes- 10
Complexity- 5
Concept- 3
Story- 0

basically, I didn't like it because of what you talk about. cuz it's not my cup of tea. nevertheless, the multis are

[lilrossy]

aight kewl, thanx man, appreciate it.

[Rain Matrix]

damn bro you felt the need to get all gangsta with it

I liked the title the rhyme scheme was a little simple but it seemed to flow well

[lilrossy]

thanx for the feedbak man.

[Solace]

I enjoyed the verse, nice rhymes, multies, transitions and scheme.

, dis beat's so phat, got back tits,

[lilrossy]

haha, thanx man.