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Dead Wrong (keystyle)

Postby AOBrien09 » Nov 3rd, '09, 22:37

yeah, yeah motherfucker's wanna know, how to put me in a nervous disposition,
but they can't am always gonna blow, an lyric's serve this like nutrition,
cause they good for ya, but refuse an take that bad shit, that drake shit,
talkin bout's bullet's huh, you on lil wayne's dick if you on that fag's fake dick,
don't say a don't have ambition, a slave my mind's system with them,
workin overtime just to clock a line, an a don't engage in the bitchin,
stay away from phoney's who probably blow me, so they no homie,
they try show me their friendly, side but their dick's first like cheney,
say amy you figuired out am crazy, well bit too late already raped see,
you must hate me, but can't tell with your mouth being taped hehe,
why do I find it funny, probably cause am crazy so bitch spread your tongue,
an leg's wider hunny, so you can give head while a fuck ya jeess am DEAD WRONG,

Short Keystyle a wrote to dead wrong beat :whistle: parental advisory is advised :sweating:
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Re: Dead Wrong (keystyle)

Postby Just Silver » Nov 3rd, '09, 23:43

AOBrien09 wrote:yeah, yeah motherfucker's wanna know, how to put me in a nervous disposition,
but they can't am always gonna blow, an lyric's serve this like nutrition,
cause they good for ya, but refuse an take that bad shit, that drake shit,
talkin bout's bullet's huh, you on lil wayne's dick if you on that fag's fake dick,
don't say a don't have ambition, a slave my mind's system with them,
workin overtime just to clock a line, an a don't engage in the bitchin,
stay away from phoney's who probably blow me, so they no homie,
they try show me their friendly, side but their dick's first like cheney,
say amy you figuired out am crazy, well bit too late already raped see,
you must hate me, but can't tell with your mouth being taped hehe,
why do I find it funny, probably cause am crazy so bitch spread your tongue,
an leg's wider hunny, so you can give head while a fuck ya jeess am DEAD WRONG,

Short Keystyle a wrote to dead wrong beat :whistle: parental advisory is advised :sweating:

cant really picture it to that beat otherwise good imagery but needs lil more multis
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Re: Dead Wrong (keystyle)

Postby Ticalrecords » Nov 4th, '09, 00:10

hello i'm ad libing it/ my fucked up man, my name has "kill" in it/
its also funny i got a "I" in front of that/ aite i'll hold up, run it back/
got it good great- now add an "N" for nitrogen/ or negative cuz thats what the world loooks to me on these acid based hiker trips/ either way im getting higher/ never tired, no matter how many severed wires, in my head are swinging loose like tree tethered tires/ a hole in the middle ima jump through it, screw it - im clueless/ that the otherside has a better view of/ the grassing growing over this young grave/ i hope you grow old my love - at least last until my son's age/ but alas, i know that you will get pregnant/ and one day they will pull you out of that hole-like entrance, or exit, but this time she'll emerge in segments/ did you feel fervish for a second, any ways its sad cuz i have her phone right here, and the last call she missed was her mother... aww isnt that all clean and touching/ but a little part of me is grudging, the fact that i didnt make mother listen to her little daughter's screams and fussing/ i could have asked her how to control her better/ she's 17 eyars old, she aint too old for leather/ with your next kid maybe you can introduce the belt early/ cuz yo first one knelt early, she def aint used to feelin hell's fury/ hahahaa you out of shots? here let me show what a knife looks like/ slashed wrists will have you goin for broke like suge knight/ put that hook right, there puff daddy - i dont care how he sees it now /i dont use my words to be a dick, therefore i dont put words in poeples mouths/ yo.. hold me a light/ cuz i know when i say "im dead wrong", that your hoping im right/



i got lost in the moment :smoking:. dead wrong is a great beat.
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