by Emadyville » Nov 4th, '09, 03:45
Some people were mentioning structure, and someone said to make the lines be about the same length, they said something like for example:
************************************dude
***********************************mood
^that's the right idea but let me help you a little more. You want the structure, or each bar (line) or whatever to have the same amount of syllables, it doesn't have to have to line up like was said before and I showed again ^^^.
For example if you're saying in a verse:
It’s become outrageous it’s like a plague-is,
Contagious I’m lit but the pages flameless,
They don't match up exactly but they each have 11 syllables, that's not the best example cause they are extremely close in length but I hope that you understand what I'm saying. If you have a bar with 12 syllables and the next with 8 it's prolly not going to flow. Hopefully this helped, any other questions feel free to PM me!
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