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Fa-Q - Number One (Feat Yahhah)

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Fa-Q - Number One (Feat Yahhah)

Postby Fa-Q » Nov 5th, '09, 03:02

What's that noise, its my anger knocking,
Its a stranger talking,
Now I'm danger walking,
Knock you out in one blow, one punch,
Some dunce, hangin out with dumb cunts,
About to get his skull cracked through the eye sockets,
Reach into my pockets,
Then strap myself and blast off with high rockets,
I light my house, with a thousand lightning bugs,
Flicker flicker, like when I'm lighting drugs,
It helps and hurts, like biting hugs,
Or lips of poison, blood dripping down from my pinochio nose,
I wrote these flows, in order to tell my story,
I'm on a charity of fire, and hells my glory,
Glass windows broken out, in an open house,
Does it really matter if their broken out, now my twisted mind,
Is listed as nine, and now I'm locked in for the top ten, like Rakim,


So here I come as fearless as a soldier,
I'm relentless, repentless,
like a sinner or a winner,
taking second to none,
with the destiny to reach number one,


I'm locked in a treasure chest,
Me and Yah, how do you measure best,
With a ruler, meter or yard stick,
I'm fucking the world, now I got a scarred dick,
Swimming laps in pools of blood,
The rain pouring on my approaching grave cools the mud,
As I raise both ghost hands,
As the fail to reach the heavens like most plans,
I try and fly there and fall fast,
Get up and try call to ask,
but don't get a dial tone,
So I jog a mile home, and get pissed off at every person I meet along the way,
Promising ill be cursin every song to play,
My bloody finger prints, all over that singer prince,
I've had bee stingers since,
My fearless eyes, turned to tearless cries,


So here I come as fearless as a soldier,
I'm relentless, repentless,
like a sinner or a winner,
taking second to none,
with the destiny to reach number one,


(Yahhah)
Running down the avenue demons screaming after you,
They laugh at you your simple little attitude is blasted back to the back of you,
Showing just the black of you it’s only what you have to do,
Seems like they trapped you to the back of that statue,
where you get smacked black blue,
Asking you as if the impact is too much but I’m too tough to crack and spew,
And I’m too rough to laugh so I act about as whack as you,
No matter how far they march I take pride in the spirit,
I divide and clear it I supply a lyric but you have to survive to hear it,
I die and survive I’m risen even my existence supplies forgiveness,
Blind repentance blind like my vision yet so smoothly written,
I lose the rhythm with loose women in my loose fitting crucifixion,
I use the given conviction to confuse what is written and reduce it to fiction,
Poison me it’s flattering,
But now the scattered leaves of my battered dreams are surrounding me like Saturn’s rings,
They keep chasing after me so I half hustle for show,
Run through so much gasoline that my calf muscles explode,


So here I come as fearless as a soldier,
I'm relentless, repentless,
like a sinner or a winner,
taking second to none,
with the destiny to reach number one,
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Re: Fa-Q - Number One (Feat Yahhah)

Postby D'Leh » Nov 5th, '09, 03:04

homies, that shit was sick!!! i love it!!! great rhymes, good flow and structure i really love it!! i wanna make a feat, with you guys chek my last drop is kinda short!! Dead Wrong
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Re: Fa-Q - Number One (Feat Yahhah)

Postby Yah-hah » Nov 5th, '09, 05:31

Thanks zurito. Yo Fa-Q I really dug your 2nd verse. Fucked the world, now I got a scarred dick. Only you homie
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


Nundea Mekeze comin soon May 4th
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Re: Fa-Q - Number One (Feat Yahhah)

Postby Fa-Q » Nov 5th, '09, 09:40

Lol Jus and thanks a lot Zuri
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Re: Fa-Q - Number One (Feat Yahhah)

Postby Fa-Q » Nov 5th, '09, 21:57

Lol Jus you know I think of that kinda stuff on a day ti day basis
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