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Re: Coleon - Something To Remember

Postby classthe_king » Nov 6th, '09, 03:53

Dang this was dope. First i would like to say that is one of my favorite samples of all time. Your flow on this was perfect. Everything went together perfectly. Lyrics were alright, not your crazy rhyming lyrics but still had the dope emotional story telling vibe.
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Re: Coleon - Something To Remember

Postby classthe_king » Nov 6th, '09, 04:04

Coleon wrote:
classthe_king wrote:Dang this was dope. First i would like to say that is one of my favorite samples of all time. Your flow on this was perfect. Everything went together perfectly. Lyrics were alright, not your crazy rhyming lyrics but still had the dope emotional story telling vibe.


thanks man, i feel ya, if/when i start recording i'll add another verse :y:

this was some emotional shit, i feel i could have been alot bette on the writing part but i was focusing on the audio aspect, i need a median


i feel ya, hows the quest for audio coming?
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Re: Coleon - Something To Remember

Postby classthe_king » Nov 6th, '09, 04:22

Got a mic the other day. Going to try and start recording. You won't see anything for awhile though.




haha feed this bitches!!
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Re: Coleon - Something To Remember

Postby classthe_king » Nov 6th, '09, 04:24

Coleon wrote:
classthe_king wrote:Got a mic the other day. Going to try and start recording. You won't see anything for awhile though.






fuckin sweet, what kind?


Gigaware mic, not anything good. Maybe ill get an expensive one at christmas. Just got a mic with decent quality so i could practice.
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Re: Coleon - Something To Remember

Postby classthe_king » Nov 6th, '09, 04:28

Coleon wrote:i couldn't imagine askin for a mic for christmas...maybe i will though and say it's for my webcam lol

little 200 dollar mic for a web cam mom? :sweating:


hahaha, theres no way i would ask my parents to get me one. Probably see if my grandma would sneak me one and not tell my parents. She's cool like that :y:
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Re: Coleon - Something To Remember

Postby gutawafang » Nov 6th, '09, 04:31

if flows very well man.

certain lines are pretty common but still it's quite good because of multis. :8)
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Re: Coleon - Something To Remember

Postby classthe_king » Nov 6th, '09, 04:36

Coleon wrote:if i asked my grandma for a mic she'd get me a tin can with a fuckin string tied in it lol

i wish i didn't live here in this hell hole where finding a mic near is about as likely as finding a person with all their teeth :(

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Come up about what 80 miles :shifty:
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Re: Coleon - Something To Remember

Postby classthe_king » Nov 6th, '09, 04:41

:o Ive already marked my calender.
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Re: Coleon - Something To Remember

Postby classthe_king » Nov 6th, '09, 04:46

Coleon wrote::o that's a big ass calendar

i guess i'll wait in line for Detox that day then head on over after watching a world peace treaty and see Tuneisen win the Nobel....sounds like a god day


word, word, we'll just meet in the studio.
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Re: Coleon - Something To Remember

Postby classthe_king » Nov 6th, '09, 12:32

Exactly
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Re: Coleon - Something To Remember

Postby Solace » Nov 8th, '09, 21:52

Shiiit that was tight. Loved the flow, the multies, the story, the way it ended was perfect too. Great job Cole. :worship:
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