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Screw a Screw I Keep It Loose

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Screw a Screw I Keep It Loose

Postby Solace » Nov 2nd, '09, 23:17

It's like I'm crawling, you're the only one who can lift me up,
These trippy stunts I'm pullin', in my room with these niffy cuts,
Slashed across my wrist, honestly obviously I've lost my wit,
This rotten spit, I'm launching it, this darkness shit I'm caught in it,
Falling calling names out, but all I'm receiving is pain now,
I've twisted my mentality to the point of ripping my brain out,
It's insane how I'm enjoying this, I'm comforted with loneliness,
Though I wish to have the friends I've needed to be mostly with,
Can't reject myself, nope, I'm my own friend and so,
Now I'm never turned down, fuck the world, I'll stay alone,
So yeah I fit in...I fit in so much I'm fuckin' hidden,
Fuck I'll burn down my school, it'll just be good riddance,
I'm spitting as I'm slitting millions of little childrens parents',
Throats so they can choke a lot but really that shit is incoherent,
A way of getting back, it's not ripping track cause my shit is wack,
I hate myself, my brainwaves fucked up like I was sniffin' crack.
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Re: Screw a Screw I Keep It Loose

Postby classthe_king » Nov 2nd, '09, 23:26

Haha wow, this was great too. Loved this part:

Slashed across my wrist, honestly obviously I've lost my wit,
This rotten spit, I'm launching it, this darkness shit I'm caught in it,
Falling calling names out, but all I'm receiving is pain now,
I've twisted my mentality to the point of ripping my brain out,
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: Screw a Screw I Keep It Loose

Postby Solace » Nov 4th, '09, 02:09

Thanks bro. :flower:
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Re: Screw a Screw I Keep It Loose

Postby Spyder » Nov 5th, '09, 22:02

liking this little peice man

nice mutlies and shit :y:
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Re: Screw a Screw I Keep It Loose

Postby Solace » Nov 8th, '09, 22:01

Didnt notice your feed..Thanks :y:
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