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Postby gutawafang » Nov 7th, '09, 08:42

No need to find the words to describe a Felise
Give me a pen and paper, I could make you a list
Meeting you was like you was granting a wish
And then I happily gave you a chance to be pissed
Flipped the two birds, expressing two words
Well I know it’s the “Fuck you” depressing two words
Write you a rhyme? I won’t possibly do worse
But how did you predict? Is it a new curse?
I looked at the dots in the sky like it’s a morse code
And the meteors falling but in a pause mode
So I gave you two words too, it says I love you
It’s written on the sky, it’s right above you
Simplicity but it’s a complicated matter to confess to you
Perfect stranger but imperfect way to addressing you
Felise, could we start as friends, give me the chance
Like I gave you one too, so that I could make the plans?
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Re: Felise

Postby macdaddy019967 » Nov 7th, '09, 08:52

does Felise have a sister? :smoking:
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Re: Felise

Postby Drama Setter » Nov 7th, '09, 08:53

Oh Felise is the name of a girl so...

Cool drop man :y:
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Re: Felise

Postby gutawafang » Nov 7th, '09, 08:56

macdaddy019967 wrote:does Felise have a sister? :smoking:

I just got to know her. http://misartofcogitations.blogspot.com ... elise.html

drama setter wrote:Oh Felise is the name of a girl so...

Cool drop man :y:

Thanks for checking it out homie. Much appreciated. ;)
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Postby macdaddy019967 » Nov 7th, '09, 09:00

gutawafang wrote:
macdaddy019967 wrote:does Felise have a sister? :smoking:

I just got to know her. http://misartofcogitations.blogspot.com ... elise.html

drama setter wrote:Oh Felise is the name of a girl so...

Cool drop man :y:

Thanks for checking it out homie. Much appreciated. ;)

wow that was an amazingly interesting read thanks Guta :smoking:
was it true though?
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Re: Felise

Postby gutawafang » Nov 7th, '09, 09:04

Word it is. :smoking:
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Postby macdaddy019967 » Nov 7th, '09, 09:07

gutawafang wrote:Word it is. :smoking:

you better hook up with that 15 year old then and it is so fuckin weird how she pretty much read your mind on the whole eminem and writing thing its like a perfect match :b:
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Re: Felise

Postby gutawafang » Nov 8th, '09, 01:37

macdaddy019967 wrote:
gutawafang wrote:Word it is. :smoking:

you better hook up with that 15 year old then and it is so fuckin weird how she pretty much read your mind on the whole eminem and writing thing its like a perfect match :b:

:8) :8) :8) word.
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Re: Felise

Postby gutawafang » Nov 9th, '09, 03:28

Thanks for the dope feedback Krayzy. ;)
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Re: Felise

Postby D'Leh » Nov 9th, '09, 21:04

Great Structure, flow and rhymes...good shit homie!!!
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Re: Felise

Postby gutawafang » Nov 10th, '09, 02:23

D'Leh wrote:Great Structure, flow and rhymes...good shit homie!!!

Arigato. :)
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Re: Felise

Postby Relapse.LP » Nov 10th, '09, 02:45

Excellent verse. :y:
Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/

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Postby gutawafang » Nov 10th, '09, 02:46

da.relapse.lp wrote:Excellent verse. :y:

thank you for your excellency. :flower:
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Postby Relapse.LP » Nov 10th, '09, 02:48

gutawafang wrote:
da.relapse.lp wrote:Excellent verse. :y:

thank you for your excellency. :flower:


You mean: "thank you for feedback, your excellency".

:king:
Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
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Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/

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Postby gutawafang » Nov 10th, '09, 03:01

da.relapse.lp wrote:
gutawafang wrote:
da.relapse.lp wrote:Excellent verse. :y:

thank you for your excellency. :flower:


You mean: "thank you for feedback, your excellency".

:king:

Ok. :tounge2:
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