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Soliloquy Of Spirit

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Soliloquy Of Spirit

Postby MC Anonymous » Nov 8th, '09, 18:43

There's a bunch of little mishaps in life we have to swallow
we have to gargle, and eat it, regurgitate it, and wallow
but it's different, it's different when no one is there to listen
in spirit or in flesh, it's death that's there to wish in
Sometimes you feel like broken dreams, are harmony
but it's different, because the armory of god is ''guarding me''
You love, you late, you feel, you lust, you lost
and the only person who ever loved you, you treated wrong
I'm in the same position, I can listen, you can listen
we can listen together as one person, and share our diction's
or addictions, or maybe, you just want to be alone
in a zone of euphoria, where your bones are your own
and the microphone, or pen, or paint, or pad
is the release of pain you had, the rain of glad
I relate to you and you are never alone
and If you have this song, it's like a letter to home

I've had my worries, my struggles, my pain
my fame, my loss, my love, my gain
my death in my family, my loss of my vanity
saying how can this be, someone please awaken me
when I woke up, I was dead in an alley way
tears of my soul, bleeding on the floor at night and day
There was a Man, he just stared as I died
that Man was myself, with my tears in his eyes

The soliloquy of spirit, you should hear it, it's amazing
so eloquent with wording, that you cry when it's grazing
The tears are your soul, bleeding, because it's speaking
so listen to the water, as it drops at the evening
the morning sun, and the darkened moon are the saviors
they relate to you, one is sadness, one is anger
the stars are the particles, that shape your emotions
aurora-borealis is your chest, it's the ocean
depending on the color, it's your mood, so no wonder
it's plastered with a blueish-gray, even as you slumber
The planet is in symphony with your spirit, it's listening
morning light through the windows, rays as it's glistening
It's apparent that you're not alone, you're never alone
we're never alone, and humanity is sure to grow
so put down the noose, and put down the gun
and listen to the words, and just ground yourself... one.

I've had my worries, my struggles, my pain
my fame, my loss, my love, my gain
my death in my family, my loss of my vanity
saying how can this be, someone please awaken me
when I woke up, I was dead in an alley way
tears of my soul, bleeding on the floor at night and day
There was a Man, he just stared as I died
that Man was myself, with my tears in his eyes
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Soliloquy Of Spirit

Postby Arabian Shady » Nov 8th, '09, 19:17

nice strong emotional piece, i kinda found the flow off at points but maybe it cause of the beat you wrote too? good meaning,
Good drop homes
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50 years & going straight, Yet this performance aint worth your time,OUR
Shit is BACKSTAGE,Cause the front page aint worth Kashmir and Palestine.
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Re: Soliloquy Of Spirit

Postby Xray » Nov 8th, '09, 19:19

That was really deep, specially the alley line. Amazing song man, and I love the title, had to look it up though, but its original. This is your best written song, cause each line painted a picture in my head and it was dope man. Really good, finally getting the hang of writing meaningful shit. :y: Second verse had a dmx flow to it, could of sworn dmx wrote the second verse. :o
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Over a billion bullets shooting from the chopper's arm
Carry a motherfucker head that I shred in Nam
I speak literally, figuratively, the prophet gone


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Re: Soliloquy Of Spirit

Postby DƎRDYPK » Nov 8th, '09, 20:00

There goes Anonymous on some whole other shit :shakehead: lol
:worship: I love this piece though..reading it gave me the chills
you should make audio of this :worship: :worship:
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Re: Soliloquy Of Spirit

Postby Solace » Nov 8th, '09, 22:00

Damn dude...that was really good. Loved both verses, flowed well, great vocabulary used, multies were good. Chorus was perfect. Great capturing of emotion in that piece. As DerdyPK said, I also think it'd be great for you to record it.
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Re: Soliloquy Of Spirit

Postby Yah-hah » Nov 10th, '09, 04:25

Yo my favorite anon piece. Nice emotion dude. Insane audio man. Much love homie
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