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A is for... (Word Series)

Postby Relapse.LP » Nov 11th, '09, 05:29

Actual alliterations...

"Arachnid" accidentally annihilated this admired art academically/
Astonishing aspiration acts as an anathema in America automatically/
Artists attempt alternatives to art as if acting as average autism/
Airport attacks at Afghanistan advises aggression and alcoholism/
Ambiguous actions add additional anger to anti-Americans and atheists/
Arabs arrogantly apologize in arguments against "Athena" and "Aegis"/
Artificiality assists arsonist actions at Afghan altars; altars ablaze and/
Abusive addicts accept absurd and abrupt "adjectives" like "abrasive"/

Yes, I took some shots at people here. :shifty:
Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/

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Re: A is for... (Word Series)

Postby classthe_king » Nov 11th, '09, 05:31

cool idea, but as a rap song :n:
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Re: A is for... (Word Series)

Postby Relapse.LP » Nov 11th, '09, 05:33

classthe_king wrote:cool idea, but as a rap song :n:


I never intended it to really be a rap song. More like poem; it is Creative Writing. :y:

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Dude, I remember I read somewhere on this article about "25 Worst Rap Lines Ever", this rapper was using words that started with some random shit and made no fucking sense at all. Lmao.
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Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
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Re: A is for... (Word Series)

Postby gutawafang » Nov 12th, '09, 05:43

This is fucking creative, period. :y:
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Re: A is for... (Word Series)

Postby Yah-hah » Nov 12th, '09, 10:41

Yeah man its creative writing and that shit is dope. Sick way to flow even keeping the a's. Good shit keep at it son :b:
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