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Re: Too many Multies too Fast!

Postby macdaddy019967 » Nov 11th, '09, 10:33

ehh nice try :y:
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Re: Too many Multies too Fast!

Postby Ka0t1c » Nov 11th, '09, 15:38

good try but i thought it was garbage... sorry
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: Too many Multies too Fast!

Postby MC Anonymous » Nov 11th, '09, 16:16

Kaotic wrote:good try but i thought it was garbage... sorry

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Re: Too many Multies too Fast!

Postby Relapse.LP » Nov 11th, '09, 20:02

Decent attempt, but don't try to spam multies to try to confuse the reader.

Feed mine please. :)

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Re: Too many Multies too Fast!

Postby Solace » Nov 12th, '09, 02:00

Was pretty dope for a keystyle, started off weak but got better in the middle and ended pretty good.
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Re: Too many Multies too Fast!

Postby gutawafang » Nov 12th, '09, 07:52

I know it's written to Old time's sake beat. Or maybe I'm just guessing. LMAO.

yeah. nice mutlis. :y: :y: :y:
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Re: Too many Multies too Fast!

Postby Yah-hah » Nov 12th, '09, 10:33

Hey man dont worry bout all them cats hatin man. I dug it they felt a bit forced at times but hey its a keystyle so I aint trippin on it. Good job homie keep at it :y:
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Re: Too many Multies too Fast!

Postby Solace » Nov 12th, '09, 23:29

Obviously someone cant handle feedback.

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Re: Too many Multies too Fast!

Postby Just Silver » Nov 12th, '09, 23:37

If your going to bold your multis ppl will think you just learned about them or at least i did
P.S.-oh and wtf is up with that creepy ass cat thing ive seen it everywhere i dont know if i should laugh or what

Otherwise good attempt but the reason its just okay is the title itself "Too many Multies Too Fast"
thats what fucked it up IMO
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