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Re: Ghost Of Stan

Postby classthe_king » Nov 7th, '09, 18:11

Haha wow, great way or portaying the story and emotion with your lyrics. I can see em rapping this.
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Re: Ghost Of Stan

Postby Wic Kid » Nov 7th, '09, 18:12

Shit, man. I really dig it. The concept was crazy. Send this idea to Em, I think he will like it.

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Re: Ghost Of Stan

Postby Dark Blue » Nov 7th, '09, 18:17

that was sick nice job :worship:
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Re: Ghost Of Stan

Postby Requiem » Nov 7th, '09, 18:41

damn i liked it man, pretty good story telling and use of lyricism :y:
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Re: Ghost Of Stan

Postby Emadyville » Nov 7th, '09, 18:56

very good for the reasons everyone else said, i love the concept and would be impressed if he did something like this :y:
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Re: Ghost Of Stan

Postby Solace » Nov 8th, '09, 04:00

Nice piece. :y:
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Re: Ghost Of Stan

Postby lilrossy » Nov 8th, '09, 10:16

:worship:
"Too fatal, unable to crash
Sluts I introduce to anal call me a pain in the ass"
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After I came, fucked em with they own leg
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Re: Ghost Of Stan

Postby AOBrien09 » Nov 9th, '09, 23:04

Love it, the concept is just :worship:, liked how you used stan without making it sound cheesy :sweating: , a give it a fuckin 11/10 :flower:
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Re: Ghost Of Stan

Postby Dark Blue » Nov 10th, '09, 01:53

lilrossy wrote: :worship:


your name :angry:

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Re: Ghost Of Stan

Postby gutawafang » Nov 10th, '09, 02:28

dope
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Re: Ghost Of Stan

Postby Yah-hah » Nov 10th, '09, 06:40

WOW insane concept. Never would have thought of that. Nice portrayal Scott. Sick :worship:
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Re: Ghost Of Stan

Postby lilrossy » Nov 10th, '09, 07:40

lil Jonizzle wrote:
lilrossy wrote: :worship:


your name :angry:

theres only room for one "lil" in here.....

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