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Dog or cat (short keystyle)

Postby Just Silver » Nov 11th, '09, 04:08

Fierce frenzy, fear envy. no sent piece, to be sentimental
a silent instrumental, some bile and my dentals, in the back of a rental..(fade)
(faster) come up in a "flash of light" oh here comes my "afterlife"
shun all who act too nice, hittin dingy crack coke pipes
yea hes right there he is, message to the little kids
stand up strong, die so young, live your life or fuck it once
i cant do both, but you can, span "rue" doses of the plan
latency of this new breed faith for me of which i speak
"dogs" will bark "cats" will come "showers" pour.. shards of spilled dark mattered "lungs"
through "oxygen" or we all die like *oxy's friend*
good and evil rude deceitful suing feeble minded people
ending with a meaning of confused and utter beholds
so are you the dog or the cat in this life we know?

Very quick key not too proud of the structure but fuck it
Meanings of good and evil fighting each
other through war and our own ignorance
other little hiddens as well

*oxys friend means Billy mays(oxyclean)deceased :'(

Rue doses of the plan meaning regret basically giving people the idea they are powerless against it
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Re: Dog or cat (short keystyle)

Postby Just Silver » Nov 14th, '09, 03:50

bump
been slacking on Keys and still am
need time to improve
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Re: Dog or cat (short keystyle)

Postby Yah-hah » Nov 14th, '09, 09:04

Wow wasnt expectin that dude that was dope man. Good multies throughout. Oxy punch was dope. Solid homie keep smashin :y:
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


Nundea Mekeze comin soon May 4th
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Re: Dog or cat (short keystyle)

Postby Just Silver » Nov 14th, '09, 18:01

Yah-hah wrote:Wow wasnt expectin that dude that was dope man. Good multies throughout. Oxy punch was dope. Solid homie keep smashin :y:

thanks for the feed :y:
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