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Postby Pte.Pelkey. » Nov 15th, '09, 11:43

THESE R MY THOUGHTS
ITS COPYWRITED
DONT COPY ME
FUCK OFF.
FAGGOTS.
FUCK ALL OF YOU.
EVERYONE.
EVERY SINGLE ONE OF YOU.
EVENE THE ADMINISTER.
HAVE A BEER AND LAUGH. :b: :shifty:


Does anyone just sit there and think...?
"I think I might get into drugs"
You know, not for partying or having a good time
for the times your alone, bored out of your mind
your lost in yourself and nobody else.
And all you can fucking do is feel sorry for whatever
dignity you have left in your selfish life.

Everyones out drinking
I'm pissed cuz im inside thinking
no invites, shit I'm about to piss on this town
and kick everyone down
yeah I've been down
fuck all you sluts ya'll get around
way too much, ye dumb slut.....

Sidewalks, a place to talk and walk with a lover
a friend untill I place claymores on each dead end
it'll be your dead friend, not mine see I got no head
to head straight with, I'm straight hanus, crimes
when I drink and I'm high, it's the substances
that make me smile, untill I walk those thousand miles.
Sober as can be, dreaming the craziest dreams
I love life and how you live it, But my life
is like I'm a wax statue watching the main exhibits.

My Controlled Choas:

-Knows no boundries
-The essence of mankind
-Lies deep inside my soul
-Afraid to show love
-Love between two cynics
-Organized violent conflict
-Rage in humans will always wage war

War does not determine who is right, but who is left.


They say anger stems from fear and leads too hate
I say clench your fists and rush the stage.

It brings us closer to our true primal roots.

I earn this shit!
I paid my dues
working all my life
man I made my shoes!


People boast and they say there the best
there a joke but I bet i'm the best.
I don't smoke but I light up a lot
I used to, collect rocks, sup hunny?
Spent lunch money on pot, and got hungry.
Gloc hungry, joined the army, you can't harm me


See pardon me, a part of me is witty more then others
clone me and you'll have a perfect band of brothers.
what you'll uncover is a man who manifests

raw human emotion at its most critical point
at some point a life can vanish
it's sad when a loved one leaves the planet
we stand planted to the ground
wondering why and how
wishing praying to god as hard as we can
to be able to see them again.
crying our hearts out, the sparks out
the memory remains in our brains
the ones left remain as a faint reminder
of the impact that one person had.
so sad, I'm crying even now
tunneling down inside myself tryin to help
one another, eachother were all the same
we each aim to be great live a long and happy life
a wife and kids, switch to another topic
and we all will sin but the amazing thing is
god sacrificed so much in order for us to be forgiven
this is why we are living, to be forgiving and ridden of our sins.
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Re: ///////FOCUS ON ME\\\\\\\\

Postby gutawafang » Nov 15th, '09, 11:46

she was superb. :y:
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Re: ///////FOCUS ON ME\\\\\\\\

Postby Fa-Q » Nov 15th, '09, 11:53

((((((((((((((((((()))))))))))))))))((((((((((((((((())))))))))))))))))) See how annoying that is
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