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I'm Me

Postby mcZu » Nov 15th, '09, 01:26

Wrote this out of boredom to a Wayne beat (if you didn't figure that out form the title)

I’m in the underground like a missile in a silo
My sound is like having an orgasm while being mild yo
The long arm can’t catch me like Venus De Milo
So sue-aside if you seek to handle the heat
Fill in the ledgers if you try to tackle the sheets
So try to amp the heights I express like Kilimanjaro
Lyrically I’ll kill and put y’all in ten jars yo
My bars are something like fusing Zod and Bizzaro
Sick like a tumor yo, you won’t see tomorrow
I’m a pharaoh ‘bout to be fair with y’all yo
Call y’all Jim Johnson, it’s time to leave the bench
I’ve been in temptation before seeing the end
When Siberia will stop freezing I’ll be damned
Meaning never, like Claire getting killed by an enemy
I don’t care if I offend any of you, please
Do you still follow B? All of ya will just cease
‘cause it’s me….
"Truth is limitless in its range; if you drop a 'T' and look at it in reverse, it could hurt."
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Re: I'm Me

Postby BILI » Nov 15th, '09, 01:33

Multies and rhymes were good :y: ,flow was dope :y: I really liked it,nice piece :y:
My bars are something like fusing Zod and Bizzaro
Sick like a tumor yo, you won’t see tomorrow.............my fav part
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Re: I'm Me

Postby Fa-Q » Nov 15th, '09, 03:35

I was listening to Empire state of mind and that beat fits perfectly lol but which Jim Johnson is that....is that eagles d coordinater RIP jim johnson....


Good flow and good namedrops and wordplay
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Re: I'm Me

Postby Yah-hah » Nov 15th, '09, 09:58

Nice everything real balanced, flow wordplay multies. Diggin it homie
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
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Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: I'm Me

Postby mcZu » Nov 15th, '09, 14:42

BILI wrote:Multies and rhymes were good :y: ,flow was dope :y: I really liked it,nice piece :y:
My bars are something like fusing Zod and Bizzaro
Sick like a tumor yo, you won’t see tomorrow.............my fav part
If you wanna return feed?
viewforum.php?f=24

Thanks BILI, apppreciate it.

Fa-Q wrote:I was listening to Empire state of mind and that beat fits perfectly lol but which Jim Johnson is that....is that eagles d coordinater RIP jim johnson....


Good flow and good namedrops and wordplay

Yeah, the defensive coordinator (R.I.P). And thanks Fa, appreciate it.

Yah-hah wrote:Nice everything real balanced, flow wordplay multies. Diggin it homie

Thanks Yah, appreciate it, man.
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