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Random 16 (and I mean random)

Postby Fa-Q » Nov 15th, '09, 03:28

Justa buncha random shit that really doesn't mean anything lol



I start speaking in tongues,
blood leaking from, my reaking gums,
creeping bums, start raping weeping nuns,
so the nuns start seeking guns,
Peaking suns, turn into dying stars,
Now Jupiter is denying mars,
My ax blades, turn into sword handles,
Forest fires are ignored candles,
The Micheline man using gasaline,
To yank off instead of vasoline,
Or a senior masterbating to a class ring,
I stick my dick in a moving bike tires,
Got shot by Smokey cause I like fires,
She pushed me in a grave that said mike meyers,
Its night of the living dead,
I got this zombie giving me head,
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Re: Random 16 (and I mean random)

Postby Emadyville » Nov 15th, '09, 03:34

very random but I liked the rhymes, i really liked this good work :y:
Menzo wrote:Its cuz you're dope and Daddy Dubs. No one fucks with that


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Re: Random 16 (and I mean random)

Postby Fa-Q » Nov 15th, '09, 03:39

Thanks Scott and Emville
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Re: Random 16 (and I mean random)

Postby Yah-hah » Nov 15th, '09, 09:57

Actually flowed really good man. Loved the Forest fires are ignored candles line. Man good multies nice flow very random. Loving it homie
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

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Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Random 16 (and I mean random)

Postby Fa-Q » Nov 15th, '09, 11:46

Lol thanks Just
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Re: Random 16 (and I mean random)

Postby Fa-Q » Nov 15th, '09, 16:50

Where do I get this shit
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Re: Random 16 (and I mean random)

Postby BILI » Nov 15th, '09, 17:27

It was dope for random stuff :y: ,multies :y: :y: ,flow was good 2 :y:
It was really good piece to read :y: :y: ,I laughed couple times,like to that line wit your dick and bike :y:
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Re: Random 16 (and I mean random)

Postby Fa-Q » Nov 15th, '09, 18:41

BILI wrote:It was dope for random stuff :y: ,multies :y: :y: ,flow was good 2 :y:
It was really good piece to read :y: :y: ,I laughed couple times,like to that line wit your dick and bike :y:

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