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December Skies

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December Skies

Postby D'Leh » Nov 17th, '09, 02:50

*intro is young girl singing to herself, maybe aged around 6, no words just singing the melody. sings whats in the [ ] *

red sky at night, shepherds delight [criss, cross, criss, cross]
the blood of angels break the dawn [criss, cross, criss, cross]
red sky in morning, shepherds warning [criss, cross, criss, cross]
sleep now angel, close your eyes [criss, cross, criss, cross]

i thought i had closure but i was mistaken/
thought i was stable but i was unable to prevent my peace being taken//
i am forsaken, inner demons awaken/ healing wounds tear, my heart it breaks "n"//
theres no direction, self aggression, the calm lessens/
locked in oppression no regression added stress in//
my mentality a fatality blame what life has made/
the Devil sits upon my shoulder and grips the blade//

he asks "cry me a river" i nearly drowned him in an ocean/
of my emotions, they flicker over my face in slow motion/
there was no notion, of this broken Angels demotion/
darkness cloaks these shoulders that bleed/
cracked and broken from the worldly boulders they heave//
i was too blind to see how people lie and decieve/
to achieve all the the things i was too scared to believe/
like a child watching december skies on a cold christmas eve...

The hounds of hell are straining at the leash [criss, cross, criss, cross]
evil finds many ways to strike [criss, cross, criss, cross]
red scorched skies illuminate the skies [criss, cross, criss, cross]
sleep now angel, close your eyes [criss, cross, criss, cross]

the devil criss crosses pushing harder not stopping/
whispering my losses sanity levels dropping//
venomous words promise this is the way to release/
scissors, knife, compass, hunting for peace//
a mural in my skin of red outlined diamonds/
the devil offers pieces of mind if only i could find "em/
meanwhile, a red snake slides down my arm/
Lucifer keeps whispering "you will come to no harm"//

December skies rise supported by the lies and the haunting cries/
of every person with pain in their eyes, i realise you can no longer disguise/
the way they demoralize the worthy and the wise/
there are angels among us, but more of the devils spies//
its hard to keep love alive as the only hope dies, yet still have the strength to fly angel, fly...
fly angel, fly...

once released, evil must flow its course [criss, cross, criss, cross]
the sky is ablaze, stars shine like diamonds [criss, cross, criss, cross]
imprints on skin, flesh wounds and pain [criss, cross, criss, cross]
sleep now angel, close your eyes [criss, cross, criss, cross]
Let me eat your pussy while I shave you!
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Re: December Skies

Postby classthe_king » Nov 17th, '09, 02:59

smh, douche move
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: December Skies

Postby Fa-Q » Nov 17th, '09, 03:02

This is either a crazy creepy song or a insane sad song or just plain dope song....one of the three....the girls voice could be creepy as fuck but idk if it would fit anyway dope....multis were real real good and I like that cry me a river/ocean line....good drop man
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